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Alone
My eyes try to
Find you
But the fog of
Indecision
Too thick
My heart cries out
For you
But the noise of obligation
Is too loud
I find myself
Alone
Find you
But the fog of
Indecision
Too thick
My heart cries out
For you
But the noise of obligation
Is too loud
I find myself
Alone
Published 25th Apr 2018
Author's Note
A work of questions
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
25th Apr 2018 5:57pm
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25th Apr 2018 6:00pm
25th Apr 2018 6:16pm
some expression
some delivery.
impressive ink.
welcome
to the community
deep down
underground.
some delivery.
impressive ink.
welcome
to the community
deep down
underground.
25th Apr 2018 6:36pm
I appreciate the welcome 😘
And
I appreciate your thoughts on my poetry 🌹
Justafan
~M~
And
I appreciate your thoughts on my poetry 🌹
Justafan
~M~
25th Apr 2018 10:48pm
Short lines ... crisp line breaks ... my poetic weakness ... captivating write Ms M
25th Apr 2018 11:14pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
26th Apr 2018 7:18pm
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27th Apr 2018 9:54pm
too much in the way , it seems . i love how you mentioned the fog and noise ... certainly obstacles to seeing clearly .. good poem
