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note to self : either write a[t least one] good poem or die
yes!
no in-betweens.
Published 25th Apr 2018
Author's Note
Important bit: a note strictly to self, a good poem in my opinion would be some poem that'll help all readers, ease their burdens, pains and take them to a peaceful place atleast for the time they're reading.
you may call it the sequel or a twin of one earlier scribble
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/296749-one-poem/
you may call it the sequel or a twin of one earlier scribble
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/296749-one-poem/
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25th Apr 2018 3:50pm
Lol. I've already read at least one good one from you so you can breathe easy.
25th Apr 2018 5:02pm
Haha! :-)
Thank You Tim!! for cutting the noose from the gallows...
thankfully(no way narcissisticaly) i hate cyncicsm of all kind, so i'll take your word for it and spare myself. :-)
and goes to show, from yours and my esteemed Friend Uma's affection, there is compassion, alive and well here! :-)
happy i am it brought the intended initial reaction- a smile,/a laugh outta the reader!!
appreciation.
immense.
Thank You Tim!! for cutting the noose from the gallows...
thankfully(no way narcissisticaly) i hate cyncicsm of all kind, so i'll take your word for it and spare myself. :-)
and goes to show, from yours and my esteemed Friend Uma's affection, there is compassion, alive and well here! :-)
happy i am it brought the intended initial reaction- a smile,/a laugh outta the reader!!
appreciation.
immense.
25th Apr 2018 11:35pm
a best note to self to strive for ..dear poet adored ev... I hope taking to the best places...that feelgoodness..or to say simply a sync .. is achieved even in the darkest of poetic depths explored, with the diehard poet in a hopeful spark.and the fire within...
Loved the format n essence..n ofcourse the way it rings peace light love smile more :)
Keep shining xx
Loved the format n essence..n ofcourse the way it rings peace light love smile more :)
Keep shining xx
well... dear Artist admired!!
welcome!!
welcome is your presence glowing
welcome is the affection.
basically, it was a note, a reminder or you can sa kick in the hindside to self
to focus on the poems essence rather than it's finite and abstract quality of aiming for poetic perfection.
Honestly, most semantically, schematically, grammatically and poetically perfect poem is a useless waste of ink if it doesn't help no one but the poet's ego of writing a perfect poem. who needs perfect when good does thr true and reals 'good' i.e. helps the reader.
your inks do that effortlessly and seamslessly- what you've described above. i.e. the sync and if that ain't art...well am shaking my bald head!!
honored!! and utterly humbled.
immense & intense
the appreciation!!
welcome!!
welcome is your presence glowing
welcome is the affection.
basically, it was a note, a reminder or you can sa kick in the hindside to self
to focus on the poems essence rather than it's finite and abstract quality of aiming for poetic perfection.
Honestly, most semantically, schematically, grammatically and poetically perfect poem is a useless waste of ink if it doesn't help no one but the poet's ego of writing a perfect poem. who needs perfect when good does thr true and reals 'good' i.e. helps the reader.
your inks do that effortlessly and seamslessly- what you've described above. i.e. the sync and if that ain't art...well am shaking my bald head!!
honored!! and utterly humbled.
immense & intense
the appreciation!!
Anonymous
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26th Apr 2018 2:08am
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27th Apr 2018 2:22pm
Welcome
is the Artist Admired!
welcome
is the Friend!!
lol! no...no no marching orders to self here!! my friend...the faultless quality of your works here, speak for themselves, the bar you set and deliver yourself! in all honesty, feel privileged here to have been here in the company of Artists such as You kind self and my friends here!!
I see taking on the challenge and nailing it is in your ink and your DNA to say the least, otherwise to have the songs, the artworks you've shared with us... wouldn't have been what they are- gems!!
well...the note to self was indeed a reminder of the "one poem"'s pursuit, that haven't found it yet!!
appreciation
beyond words!!
is the Artist Admired!
welcome
is the Friend!!
lol! no...no no marching orders to self here!! my friend...the faultless quality of your works here, speak for themselves, the bar you set and deliver yourself! in all honesty, feel privileged here to have been here in the company of Artists such as You kind self and my friends here!!
I see taking on the challenge and nailing it is in your ink and your DNA to say the least, otherwise to have the songs, the artworks you've shared with us... wouldn't have been what they are- gems!!
well...the note to self was indeed a reminder of the "one poem"'s pursuit, that haven't found it yet!!
appreciation
beyond words!!
26th Apr 2018 9:22pm
27th Apr 2018 2:24pm
welcome
dear friend both
to the scribble
as well as to the community
that is DU!
welcome also
is the review!!
appreciation
intense.
dear friend both
to the scribble
as well as to the community
that is DU!
welcome also
is the review!!
appreciation
intense.
27th Apr 2018 2:00pm
Who would've thought the answer to
eternal life would be found
at the tip, hidden in ink, and
encapsulated within the words
of a humble scribbler.
The shear number of life altering
poems which have flowed from
your pen, if indeed lengthened
your life, then you will live forever
dear poet and my proud to have friend.
eternal life would be found
at the tip, hidden in ink, and
encapsulated within the words
of a humble scribbler.
The shear number of life altering
poems which have flowed from
your pen, if indeed lengthened
your life, then you will live forever
dear poet and my proud to have friend.
27th Apr 2018 2:30pm
Welcome
is the Friend Admired!!
Welcome
is the Artist adored!!
well, my friend's generosity and affection
knows no bounds
indeed.
Humble scribbler, yes
inker of eternal ink..ahem ahem...
as a TRUE friend, i would beg to differ and
happily agree to disagree! :-)
i get it,
my friends have cut all the nooses, and have dismantled
the gallows for now!
but i'll keep my quest alive
of the "one poem", hopefully
like the pot at the end of the rainbow... that indeed might help!
Friend yes...and if anything in my life
is to be proud of(humility being my thirst and endeavour) it's my Friends and their Friendship here! everything else...will dissipate with the tides of the time, as it should!!
appreciation
humbling, utterly humbling
beyond words!!
intense & immense!
is the Friend Admired!!
Welcome
is the Artist adored!!
well, my friend's generosity and affection
knows no bounds
indeed.
Humble scribbler, yes
inker of eternal ink..ahem ahem...
as a TRUE friend, i would beg to differ and
happily agree to disagree! :-)
i get it,
my friends have cut all the nooses, and have dismantled
the gallows for now!
but i'll keep my quest alive
of the "one poem", hopefully
like the pot at the end of the rainbow... that indeed might help!
Friend yes...and if anything in my life
is to be proud of(humility being my thirst and endeavour) it's my Friends and their Friendship here! everything else...will dissipate with the tides of the time, as it should!!
appreciation
humbling, utterly humbling
beyond words!!
intense & immense!
5th May 2018 1:00pm
5th May 2018 2:03pm
welcome
is the presence of a peer.
welcome
is the kind review.
both
appreciated.
deeply.
is the presence of a peer.
welcome
is the kind review.
both
appreciated.
deeply.
