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Caterpillar Dreams
Caterpillar dreams of silken threads
with silver smoke and golden hair spread
thickly across an egyptian cotton pillow cover
deep in the world of a foreign lover
Longingly sitting lonely in the only chair
that is big enough to contain all of my despair
while sparks of joy remembered rise
from a mind whose only memories are lies
with silver smoke and golden hair spread
thickly across an egyptian cotton pillow cover
deep in the world of a foreign lover
Longingly sitting lonely in the only chair
that is big enough to contain all of my despair
while sparks of joy remembered rise
from a mind whose only memories are lies
Published 12th Oct 2011
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15th Oct 2011 7:16pm
Thank you, can you explain what you mean by "connection"? I don't have much actual poetry or writing class background, so I'm not sure if that is a term for sometime specific. I set up my profile to ask for "friendly feedback" because I didn't want to be shot down right off the bat. I've never shown anyone my poetry before.
