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Memory Stained Walls
pulling in the driveway
after a long day at work
my smile no longer existing
turn my head to look at you
what a beautiful smile you always had
but your no longer beside me
sidewalk seems longer than usual
no light shinning thru windows
just darkness as I turn the key
heart trembling with emotions
legs shaking almost from under me
as I step into our empty house
no memories hanging on walls
just stains where they once hung
teardrops echo off emptiness
only my footsteps walk hardwood floors
where laughter from happiness used to play
loneliness roams every room
I whisper.....”good night luv” as I close my eyes
cracking of my heart breaking intrudes upon silence
cold blankets are all that hug me
Inspiration ~ “Mirror” crafted by RCWJR Robert
(and a touching comment he left for me)
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
after a long day at work
my smile no longer existing
turn my head to look at you
what a beautiful smile you always had
but your no longer beside me
sidewalk seems longer than usual
no light shinning thru windows
just darkness as I turn the key
heart trembling with emotions
legs shaking almost from under me
as I step into our empty house
no memories hanging on walls
just stains where they once hung
teardrops echo off emptiness
only my footsteps walk hardwood floors
where laughter from happiness used to play
loneliness roams every room
I whisper.....”good night luv” as I close my eyes
cracking of my heart breaking intrudes upon silence
cold blankets are all that hug me
Inspiration ~ “Mirror” crafted by RCWJR Robert
(and a touching comment he left for me)
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 14th Apr 2018
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14th Apr 2018 4:53pm
15th Apr 2018 2:44am
Hey Avahati........thank you for leaving a heart print upon this ink.......you’ve blessed me.......appreciate you much.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Apr 2018 8:49pm
Melancholy work, Flower, a much darker piece than usual. But your wording is sublime. I can almost hear the echoes in that empty house, and this moves me deeply. Excellent! Don't believe I'll be forgetting this anytime soon...
19th Apr 2018 3:33am
Hey Crow.........what a blessing your words bring to me........I’m glad my words echo emotions........tears bled down the page with this one.......appreciate you much.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Apr 2018 5:44pm
Awesome ! You brilliantly ‘painted’ with words and imaginations . . . the pain that can linger and loom when we are ‘cut’
by the one we truly love .
by the one we truly love .
19th Apr 2018 3:35am
Hey Robert.......so happy you like this one.......truly appreciate the inspiration of your words that made me feel so deeply.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Apr 2018 2:42am
22nd Apr 2018 2:48am
16th Apr 2018 5:49pm
The light dims for a second only then brightens once again. I feel the pain and emptiness in this read. A valley between the bliss.
19th Apr 2018 3:40am
Hey X.......thank you for sharing your thoughts with me and for feeling my words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Apr 2018 3:01pm
19th Apr 2018 3:42am
Hey Beautiful.......you’re always such encouragement to me.......happy for your visit upon my page.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
