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Thats her
She know she can't
Everything falls apart
Pretending to be alright
While ripping apart
Sadness all over her face
But no one noticed the pain
No one knows the eagerness to be save
It's as if she's perfectly great
She's drowning in sorrow
Accepting thy pain
Drinking agony in darkness
"Im fine" she said.
Everything falls apart
Pretending to be alright
While ripping apart
Sadness all over her face
But no one noticed the pain
No one knows the eagerness to be save
It's as if she's perfectly great
She's drowning in sorrow
Accepting thy pain
Drinking agony in darkness
"Im fine" she said.
Published 10th Apr 2018
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10th Apr 2018 4:10am
I really like the rawness of the poem. Simple yet filled with emotions. A somewhat sad write, would like to see more from you, a happier one maybe? Anyways, keep it up.
