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Loves Lost (cinquains) 7.0
(i) Happy Endings
It ends
I don't love you
Not sure I ever did
Time now to put you in the ground
End off
(ii) Escaped
Your death
My salvation
Freedom from tyranny
I'm no longer under the thumb
Your Dead
(iii) Our Relationship
My thoughts
before killing
mind over matter
I didn't mind and she didn't matter
guilt free
(iv) What Evidence?
dig it
hide the body
no way discovery
this quicksand is surly perfect
sink it
(v) Numbers
Looking
for number eight
hope she is a keeper
still there is room in the quicksand
nine, ten?
(vi) Taking a Tumble
eight fell
neck got broken
I didn't really push her
cellar stairs can be treacherous
nudge, nudge
(vii) Compliance
sex needs
but nine said nine
German girls, not for me
my sex appetite is legend
loose ten
Published 3rd Apr 2018
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You capture feelings so well with simple words
as well as to connect the titles cleverly with the after-poem
Admiration-s,
H
as well as to connect the titles cleverly with the after-poem
Admiration-s,
H
4th Apr 2018 1:57am
Thank you so much for your constant kindness and support :-)))
HUGSsssss :-))))))))))))))
HUGSsssss :-))))))))))))))
3rd Apr 2018 10:27am
4th Apr 2018 1:58am
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2018 1:46pm
Aww, us poor German girls are left out in the cold. LMAO... You always bring such interesting perspectives and pieces to the page. Sending many many hugs, my friend :-)
...Willow
...Willow
4th Apr 2018 1:59am
so glad you enjoyed these - they were fun to write :-)))))))
Huge Hugs my friend :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Huge Hugs my friend :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))
7th Apr 2018 4:03pm
Now that’s what I call closure... LOL. I’ll be keeping my eye out for loose floor boards to your hidden cellar!
But then again I would never treat you poorly, the worst punishment I might need are a few spanks 😉 hehehe
Love you sweety, big hugsss ❤️
But then again I would never treat you poorly, the worst punishment I might need are a few spanks 😉 hehehe
Love you sweety, big hugsss ❤️
8th Apr 2018 9:38pm
The Cellar (Torture dungeon) was meant to be our little secret missy - a returning spank is now due because you promised not to tell :-))))))))
Loving you - big hugs too <3 <3
Loving you - big hugs too <3 <3
