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In Natural Wonder
restless is the night
as she sheds the excitement of the day
children racing to capture magic
as they uncover hidden treasure
in the lush keep of the forest
while imps playfully frolic
dancing to the music of childhood laughter
caught in a moment
paganism and Christianity come together as one
the sunshine its self blesses them
it a source where all life flows freely
in innocence they remind me
within their primal hunger of the hunt
free spirited light shines from each face
without restrictions they revel
I see the Goddess emerge in nature
kissing their cheeks as in her bounty they wander
no storm or doubt to cloud their vision
religion a myth to these still endowed with true wisdom
they walked here as if through a portal
there mothers and fathers the doorways
into this dimension they wander
I pay close attention
I believe they carry a message
looking on in wonder
someday knowing
I will cross back into the beginning
the place I originated
and there gather all I've learned
then anew start my adventuring
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Re. In Natural Wonder
2nd Apr 2018 7:35am
Re: Re. In Natural Wonder
2nd Apr 2018 7:40am
thank you beautiful Rachelle i'm honored
I hope the day was a gorgeous one for you :)
love Crim
I hope the day was a gorgeous one for you :)
love Crim
Re. In Natural Wonder
2nd Apr 2018 10:44am
N such is that cycle of life...a beautifully expressed spill from the soul... :)
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2nd Apr 2018 4:48pm
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2nd Apr 2018 4:49pm
Re. In Natural Wonder
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2018 2:40pm
If you could only see the smile spreading across my face reading this poem, beautiful Dark Angel. Hope and power and the sense of a long awaited deep breath...much needed. Just what my weary senses needed this chilly morning. I love you, beautiful
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. In Natural Wonder
2nd Apr 2018 4:50pm
aw thank you beautiful Willow i'm overjoyed to bring you needed smiles today..
I love you dear one..
love Brenda
I love you dear one..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. In Natural Wonder
2nd Apr 2018 6:01pm
thank you most graciously beautiful Melia
your words bring me great joy this morning :)
love Brenda
your words bring me great joy this morning :)
love Brenda
Re. In Natural Wonder
3rd Apr 2018 4:32am
so beautiful and playful but i caught the message
behind the frivolity...i love when you write
of different realities converging
I aspire to become half as good
as stuff you throw away
Sandman
behind the frivolity...i love when you write
of different realities converging
I aspire to become half as good
as stuff you throw away
Sandman
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Re: Re. In Natural Wonder
17th May 2018 9:59pm
thank you dearest Sandman i'm highly honored you are a truly gifted poet..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. In Natural Wonder
3rd Apr 2018 9:56pm
"Paganism and Christianity come together as one." I never thought of them as being mutually exclusive. One can have a bit of both. Wonderful work as always, Lady Crim.
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Re: Re. In Natural Wonder
17th May 2018 10:00pm
thank you graciously Sir Crow you always gift me insight and smiles with your comments :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. In Natural Wonder
5th Apr 2018 10:59pm
this was such a beautiful and touching write - got me a wee bit teary and I am not sure really why - maybe the continuation of life's adventuring :-))))
Love and Hugs :-))))))))
Love and Hugs :-))))))))
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Re: Re. In Natural Wonder
17th May 2018 10:01pm
thank you graciously dearest David for showing love for this write :)
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re. In Natural Wonder
Anonymous
18th Apr 2018 1:00pm
Beyond the superficial is where ones attention is best laid.
Such harmony and tranquility to this beautiful one
Such harmony and tranquility to this beautiful one
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17th May 2018 10:02pm
Re. In Natural Wonder
6th May 2018 6:05pm
You're so talented Crimsin, I see your ability in writing in many different genre of poetry.
I glanced on some of your other work and they were equally prolific but for some reason i gravitated to this one.
I can relate in understanding that embracing our pasts is the way to face the future, therefore I admire the emotions and thoughts behind this poem.
I glanced on some of your other work and they were equally prolific but for some reason i gravitated to this one.
I can relate in understanding that embracing our pasts is the way to face the future, therefore I admire the emotions and thoughts behind this poem.
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7th May 2018 7:31am
thank you beautiful Layla i'm honored you've checked out my poetry you are extremely gifted it's a true pleasure to read someone of your caliber..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. In Natural Wonder
17th May 2018 9:58pm
this is very lovely .. it has such a lovely and gentle feel throughout this piece ..
these are my favourite lines
'' I see the Goddess emerge in nature
kissing their cheeks as in her bounty they wander
no storm or doubt to cloud their vision ''
.. .but i loved every line ..
these are my favourite lines
'' I see the Goddess emerge in nature
kissing their cheeks as in her bounty they wander
no storm or doubt to cloud their vision ''
.. .but i loved every line ..
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Re: Re. In Natural Wonder
17th May 2018 10:03pm
thank you graciously beautiful Daffodil for reading this older write of mine this was from Easter or Ishtar :)
you are deeply appreciated dearest poetess..
love Crim
you are deeply appreciated dearest poetess..
love Crim