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Corrosive

I tried to drink you....but i knew
You always felt,looked and moved like
Something that should've been life in every drop

But i was naive....
I realise now i should've boiled you!
Should've placed a worthy fabric above you

I would have been so happy
With whatever drops of purity
That fabric could absorb

However small the amount its the
True form that counts....right?

So i let you be as you intended....corrosive,
Undrinkable in your true form,
You've worn away tougher than me

But then,searching all the rivers your bound
To reach the sea....right?
Written by The-Darkness
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