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Temptation
Honey-glazed skin shines under the sunlight
Eyes forever burned by the sunset stare back at me
His scent invokes within me such a delight
As fresh and cool as the Mediterranean Sea.
Gentle waves greet our naked feet
As we tread along the diamond-like sand
My love for you runs just as deep
As the rain sinks far into the land.
Temptation possesses me with a strong grip
I’m as powerless as a puppet held by its strings
I’m as helpless as Eve when she committed her sin
I wonder what sensation your touch would bring.
Plump lips curve into a smile
As your wise eyes look at me knowingly
Your presence alone drives me wild
And I’m left standing behind you longingly.
I crave to touch your sand-colored hair
I desire to press my lips against yours
I’m quite possessive of you and I refuse to share
Make me scream your name until my voice goes hoarse.
Temptation has possessed my very being
You have claimed my heart and threw away the key
The poor organ increases its beating
At the thought of you ravaging me.
I can’t take it anymore, you tease
Throw me onto the sand and give me what I want
I’m afflicted with a sickness and I need your expertise
My dripping flower awaits your response.
I need to feel your body pressed against mine
You’re the very air I breathe to survive
Drink my nectar as you would a glass of wine
Even a small drop is enough for your soul to revive.
Temptation flows rapidly through my veins
I’m cold and dark and only you can ignite my flame
By tracing patterns on my skin, you’ll never lose your way
My body is waiting for your rightful claim.
My dark hair clashes against the white sand
I shiver in anticipation as you hover over me
My eager body is yours to command
As I confidently whisper: “make love to me”.
Your impressive length fills me up completely
I sigh in contentment as we become one
Every thrust of yours makes me scream in ecstasy
How wonderful it is to be young!
I belong to you as you belong to me
We’re each other’s missing half
I feel safe in your arms as we lay by the calm sea
I tell you so, and you reply with a pleased laugh.
Soon enough, I feel evidence of your desire
I understand exactly what’s your intent
Even you have been stricken by temptation’s fire
And I fondly think ‘I can do this again.’
Eyes forever burned by the sunset stare back at me
His scent invokes within me such a delight
As fresh and cool as the Mediterranean Sea.
Gentle waves greet our naked feet
As we tread along the diamond-like sand
My love for you runs just as deep
As the rain sinks far into the land.
Temptation possesses me with a strong grip
I’m as powerless as a puppet held by its strings
I’m as helpless as Eve when she committed her sin
I wonder what sensation your touch would bring.
Plump lips curve into a smile
As your wise eyes look at me knowingly
Your presence alone drives me wild
And I’m left standing behind you longingly.
I crave to touch your sand-colored hair
I desire to press my lips against yours
I’m quite possessive of you and I refuse to share
Make me scream your name until my voice goes hoarse.
Temptation has possessed my very being
You have claimed my heart and threw away the key
The poor organ increases its beating
At the thought of you ravaging me.
I can’t take it anymore, you tease
Throw me onto the sand and give me what I want
I’m afflicted with a sickness and I need your expertise
My dripping flower awaits your response.
I need to feel your body pressed against mine
You’re the very air I breathe to survive
Drink my nectar as you would a glass of wine
Even a small drop is enough for your soul to revive.
Temptation flows rapidly through my veins
I’m cold and dark and only you can ignite my flame
By tracing patterns on my skin, you’ll never lose your way
My body is waiting for your rightful claim.
My dark hair clashes against the white sand
I shiver in anticipation as you hover over me
My eager body is yours to command
As I confidently whisper: “make love to me”.
Your impressive length fills me up completely
I sigh in contentment as we become one
Every thrust of yours makes me scream in ecstasy
How wonderful it is to be young!
I belong to you as you belong to me
We’re each other’s missing half
I feel safe in your arms as we lay by the calm sea
I tell you so, and you reply with a pleased laugh.
Soon enough, I feel evidence of your desire
I understand exactly what’s your intent
Even you have been stricken by temptation’s fire
And I fondly think ‘I can do this again.’
Written by
LunasChild8
Published 28th Mar 2018
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Re. Temptation
28th Mar 2018 5:50am
A pleasure to listen to your voice sustaining rhythm and rhyme for such a long time...there's little as pleasurable as surrendering to the surge of primal energy from the second chakra...wonderful interlude...well done
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19th Sep 2018 00:34am
Hello again Lawrence. I'd appreciate you voting for this entry in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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20th Apr 2019 7:40pm
Hello Lawrence. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "BEST EROTICA" contest.
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28th Mar 2018 9:16am
A smouldering surrender to walking temptation. A good many sunshine holiday interludes start and progress the way the poem runs.
Favourite verse, climax of read:
Your impressive length fills me up completely
I sigh in contentment as we become one
Every thrust of yours makes me scream in ecstasy
How wonderful it is to be young!
Such a good read - 'I could do this again'.
Favourite verse, climax of read:
Your impressive length fills me up completely
I sigh in contentment as we become one
Every thrust of yours makes me scream in ecstasy
How wonderful it is to be young!
Such a good read - 'I could do this again'.
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19th Sep 2018 00:35am
Hello again, Solomon. I'd appreciate you voting for this entry in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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20th Apr 2019 7:41pm
Hello Solomon. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "BEST EROTICA" contest.
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19th Sep 2018 00:35am
Hi Shakti. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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20th Apr 2019 7:42pm
Hello Shakti. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "BEST EROTICA" contest.
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19th Sep 2018 00:38am
Hi Penny. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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20th Apr 2019 7:42pm
Hello Penny. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "BEST EROTICA" contest.
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19th Sep 2018 00:38am
Hi Nikk11. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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20th Apr 2019 7:43pm
Hello Nikk11. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "BEST EROTICA" contest.
Re. Temptation
31st Mar 2018 3:56am
The sensuality of your words is matched by your sultry voice in this stimulating verse... The music creates a hypnotic setting for this deeply passionate landscape. Very much enjoyed this delicious work of art!
JJ
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Re: Re. Temptation
19th Sep 2018 00:39am
Hello JJ. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
Re: Re. Temptation
20th Apr 2019 7:43pm
Hello JJ. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "BEST EROTICA" contest.
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19th Sep 2018 00:39am
Hey Andy. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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20th Apr 2019 7:43pm
Hello Andy. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "BEST EROTICA" contest.
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Such vivid flowing images ... you pulled me in ... swept me up. Hot write my dear poetess and the audio is sweet heaven ... what a sexy voice
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19th Sep 2018 00:39am
Hello, lovely LDF. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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20th Apr 2019 7:44pm
Hello LDF. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "BEST EROTICA" contest.
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24th Mar 2024 10:36pm
Wow, thank you also for resharing this one… I love your poetry. It’s intense and yet hits the exact spot it should. Love it, you’ve inspired me 🫶✨
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