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the day of not giving a fuck has arrived
regardless
utterly disregarding
everything and anything
yes
that time has come
to say the obvious
and the overdue
the day you finally realize the reality and say
fuck everything
that is the time
and the place
everything else is useless background
time?
fuck time!
this is pure liberation
bet you too
feel it
this moment
albeit remotely
the absolute liberation
from everything
meditation
is a hoax
so fuck meditation
and recite this mantra
the day of not giving a fuck
has arrived
Published 25th Mar 2018
Author's Note
#Freedom #Liberation
relax...this is a fictional prose! cool as cucumber here! just the musings of wandering mind.
relax...this is a fictional prose! cool as cucumber here! just the musings of wandering mind.
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25th Mar 2018 1:04pm
Hell yes =) An empowering write to all who stop to ponder, thank you for sharing cold_fusion!
25th Mar 2018 1:14pm
welcome
dear Friend!!
what a sight!! glad indeed to see you here and
to learn it conveyed what i meant!!
appreciation
intense
appreciation
immense!
dear Friend!!
what a sight!! glad indeed to see you here and
to learn it conveyed what i meant!!
appreciation
intense
appreciation
immense!
25th Mar 2018 1:17pm
It's an odd realm of reality; always easier said than done, but crucial nevertheless.
welcome dear peer
firstly to DU -the community
as well as to the scribble
yes! spot on. easier said than done
an old mate once said
"The moment you stand up to tyranny
is the moment you actually become free"
aim....
is to take the reader there
albeit for a moment- to feel the release
the liberation
and
absolute freedom
from everything
to make life that bit easier albeit for a small while
when they go back. Pumped.
welcome
once again is the visit
the feedback!!
appreciation
immense!
firstly to DU -the community
as well as to the scribble
yes! spot on. easier said than done
an old mate once said
"The moment you stand up to tyranny
is the moment you actually become free"
aim....
is to take the reader there
albeit for a moment- to feel the release
the liberation
and
absolute freedom
from everything
to make life that bit easier albeit for a small while
when they go back. Pumped.
welcome
once again is the visit
the feedback!!
appreciation
immense!
25th Mar 2018 1:39pm
Loved the fictional ramblings
Oft the case to shout out some hail mary fucks in time of not giving a fuck xD
Ok ok maybe not out loud unless in the embraces of a lover in the late at night small hours
Oft the case to shout out some hail mary fucks in time of not giving a fuck xD
Ok ok maybe not out loud unless in the embraces of a lover in the late at night small hours
25th Mar 2018 1:46pm
hahahaha!!
lol!! OMG! left me with belly laughs there Rose!!
welcome
your presence and your wisdom laced feedback!
true!
so very true!
yes..letting off steam yet not disturbing the chill!!
appreciation!!
immense!
lol!! OMG! left me with belly laughs there Rose!!
welcome
your presence and your wisdom laced feedback!
true!
so very true!
yes..letting off steam yet not disturbing the chill!!
appreciation!!
immense!
25th Mar 2018 1:56pm
25th Mar 2018 2:03pm
:-)
what better gift than a hearty laugh!
i say thank You dear friend!
Cheers!
what better gift than a hearty laugh!
i say thank You dear friend!
Cheers!
25th Mar 2018 3:27pm
Oh my the ideas clammering thru my mind, what to do what to do... I'm loving the simplicity, the truth but most of all the lightness that has poked my thoughts. Excellent write my sweetest friend, Mad Mad Respect,
me
me
25th Mar 2018 4:03pm
my oh my!
the honor!!
my Friend you have left me utterly speechless! over the moon, getting to know how the peer felt!
in fact all of the peers above had made my day!!
welcome
is the affection.
deep is the appreciation
for all and everything!(totally opposite to the message of the poem) :-)
the honor!!
my Friend you have left me utterly speechless! over the moon, getting to know how the peer felt!
in fact all of the peers above had made my day!!
welcome
is the affection.
deep is the appreciation
for all and everything!(totally opposite to the message of the poem) :-)
25th Mar 2018 8:17pm
With such talent & skill I assure you dearest friend of mine the honor is all mine. Much Respect,
me
me
26th Mar 2018 6:51am
well...now what can i say
but be humbled
by the honors bestowed by the peers here!! the beauty in their eyes
truly something to behold!
but be humbled
by the honors bestowed by the peers here!! the beauty in their eyes
truly something to behold!
25th Mar 2018 5:02pm
welcome
Dear admired Friend!!
well...yes! the good ol' adjustment. nothing beats a blank page,
fresh start, albeit for the moment when you make the decision and for that moment it is truly felt- the liberation, the freedom, the lightness! i guess the good old meditation tries to achieve the same but in a different way.
appreciation
intense
appreciation
immense!
Dear admired Friend!!
well...yes! the good ol' adjustment. nothing beats a blank page,
fresh start, albeit for the moment when you make the decision and for that moment it is truly felt- the liberation, the freedom, the lightness! i guess the good old meditation tries to achieve the same but in a different way.
appreciation
intense
appreciation
immense!
25th Mar 2018 9:13pm
Nice capture of those feelings
we at times have when it seems
all is closing in and no matter how
hard we try nothing we do changes
anything. Just grab the pen and
set those feelings free, better than
keeping them buried deep where the
real damage can be done.
Nicely expressed, my friend.
we at times have when it seems
all is closing in and no matter how
hard we try nothing we do changes
anything. Just grab the pen and
set those feelings free, better than
keeping them buried deep where the
real damage can be done.
Nicely expressed, my friend.
26th Mar 2018 6:19am
welcome
is the Poet admired
welcome is
the Friend so dear!!
what else to say than nod in agreement
with a wise soul
who conveyed it better than the write itself...
and yes...before the damage can be done...
better a loud whistle of a good ol' steam roller than a blast from a boiler!
appreciation
beyond words!!
is the Poet admired
welcome is
the Friend so dear!!
what else to say than nod in agreement
with a wise soul
who conveyed it better than the write itself...
and yes...before the damage can be done...
better a loud whistle of a good ol' steam roller than a blast from a boiler!
appreciation
beyond words!!
26th Mar 2018 1:14am
Pure liberation, indeed! Loved the lightness description of this truth...
26th Mar 2018 6:21am
Welcome
is the poet admired
welcome
is the review insightful!
pleasure, joy & honor is the scribbler's for a peer to have felt something!
appreciation
immense
for the visit
the review!
is the poet admired
welcome
is the review insightful!
pleasure, joy & honor is the scribbler's for a peer to have felt something!
appreciation
immense
for the visit
the review!
Anonymous
26th Mar 2018 6:32am
I`ve had
too many
of those days
including
this day
such angst
beauty ...
xoXO
26th Mar 2018 6:44am
well...
we are all
witness
from your ram-rage masterpieces here to date!!
welcome
is the Poet admired!
welcome
is the Friend!!
appreciation!
immense!
we are all
witness
from your ram-rage masterpieces here to date!!
welcome
is the Poet admired!
welcome
is the Friend!!
appreciation!
immense!
26th Mar 2018 8:42am
26th Mar 2018 9:05am
Hahaha!
welcome dear Miss Astute!!!
when writing...full Lebanese! right from the vacuum freezer!
my oh my the joy..seeing You here!!
welcome dear Miss Astute!!!
when writing...full Lebanese! right from the vacuum freezer!
my oh my the joy..seeing You here!!
27th Mar 2018 3:31am
Love it cold! Fuck time, fuck everything. I can feel it. Inspiring stuff, cold.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
29th Mar 2018 12:14pm
welcome!
is the Poet Admired!
Welcome
is the Brother!!
pleasure and honor is all mine
in having you on my scribble and such
a kind review!
appreciation
beyond words!
is the Poet Admired!
Welcome
is the Brother!!
pleasure and honor is all mine
in having you on my scribble and such
a kind review!
appreciation
beyond words!
