Forbidden

What a marvelous surprise... How I enjoyed you dipping into your repertoire and bestowing such graceful pearls...

RL'd and liked...

Tommy

Thank you dear Thomas for enjoying the surprise, and for honoring it with your recommend.

~tiger jade

Hypnotic piece Jade. I feel the closeness and content.

Thank you, dear Tim.  I love when the effect of my writes becomes real, tangible, to the reader.    ~Jade✍️

This one has me awe struck, it's just so packed with passion. The imagery and emotions are simply on spot.

Wonderfully written as usual, Jade.








~anonshadow

Thank you so much, friend Anon, for sharing how something I’ve penned (and rendered) has touched as you embrace it.    ~Jadey✍️

The lines and picture are both a turn on, and a beaut.  I might just frame your illustration.  Bon appetit!  

Ahh my friend, I would love for you to frame & mount this, (coff), picture & text, the whole thing - on one of your walls!  Divine!💌

wait...you drew that?

captivated and entranced...very hot and liquid.

Yes, poet, I did indeed, and thank you.  I became a trad’ artist long before I took pen to verse.  There are examples of my art scattered through my DU gallery, but this is the only one I’ve now posted here that features one of my minimal pencil sketches (a detailed view from the whole drawing).  I’m glad you’re taken with it, and hope you also enjoyed the write.✍️

i apologize for that somewhat cryptic comment...it was like a one two punch...first i was dizzied by the multiplicity of your abilities...and the poem knocked me out...or at least made me blush as it hit some live wires for me. i think you must know the line that leaves my expressions meek. other than that one...i actually enjoyed the most simple line in the piece:

'Breezes from her flowing hair'

the essence of the piece, his intoxication, comes through most richly with that idea...it implies there is distance between them...and yet molecules fly between them...and that whiff...that nearness...required by command...i dont know, i just imagined a mesmerizing perfume of soul.

And poet, that’s exactly how and what you were meant to think & feel & say in a perfect world, which it is for me at this moment, thanks to you.

More thank you’s to come.

paying homage to the temple you worship at

the flowering hair willing slave
perfect to sacrifice to the gods, to ones self

and so you carved out our sex hungry hearts with precision cut stanzas and uniform line count scalpels

leaving us murmuring with smoke, trap doors,and mirrors from the parlor tricks that taste divine

wonderful write Jade-Pandora
well penned.

Greetings, samael, and thank you!  I couldn’t help but be transfixed in a smile, during & after your words most stealthy in their crafty slip, yet telling in your appreciation.  A lively collection.

This certainly feels like a "forbidden" read, yet very sensual and loving.

Another excellently written read. Well done as always, Jade!

Thank you most warmly, sweet Luna.  Your appreciation of my written imageries is always like being taken by pleasant surprise once clouds part in the night to reveal moon in apex.🌕✨

You flatter me, Jade. My poems are awaiting your read as well. <3

And so they shall be - read.🌕💫

"All hope is lost in Pandora's box"   Andy J Hale

*chuckles*

Actually, it wasn’t a box, it was a covered urn.⚱️👈

Ah!

Enchanted by the style and well placed attributes. Perfect fusion of Lust and vivid passion, yet saturated in purity and grace. I hope to learn a lot from you. I will be following with attention.

Thank you for sharing your appreciation, and welcome to DUP.  Which of the American poetry sites were/are you a member of?

It's called my poetic side. Not very high rated as DUP, but it's  given me a chance to write in English. Something I never dreamed of doing, having written in Italian all my life. I found this site by shear luck. I have a lot to learn and I am fascinated by the excellent styles I am encountering.

Excellent, and thanks for the informative answer.  Welcome to my part of the Deep Underground.  Feel free to add me to your Followed Poets.  Several dozen of us (DU members) started a month-long challenge through April, and I’ll be posting new entries every day so there will be a lot for you to see & read & support.  

 Goditi il ​​tuo tempo qui.

Thank you. I am honoured.

mmmm....love the nakedness of your beautiful mind !
beautiful beyond bezazz :)

Why thank you so much, and welcome to my world.🔥

Nicely written and nice drawing! That’s something I didn’t get, my family has a lot of great drawers but it skipped me 😭

Well I believe we all have at least one exceptional way of artistic expression, so here you are on DUP, excellent!  Me?  If I wasn’t a poet or a painter, I’d be on The Food Network hosting “Martha Bakes”!  Muahaha!🍪

Why thank you, Aria.

And the feeling is mutual.