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So the Devil made suggestions
tasted of the earths dried leaves rolled in Miami
burned so sweet from a blue butane lighter
i held you tight
brushed your cheek with the back of my hand
it was the first time i really felt snow on my face
i can't let you go and i can't stay
and so these walks i take remind me of Love
leaving their claw marks
as thrift shop lapel pins stuck through the skin
pierce me for a purpose
unsanitary infections
pose me as a corpse for the camera
tasted of the earths dried leaves rolled in Miami
burned so sweet from a blue butane lighter
i held you tight
brushed your cheek with the back of my hand
it was the first time i really felt snow on my face
i can't let you go and i can't stay
and so these walks i take remind me of Love
leaving their claw marks
as thrift shop lapel pins stuck through the skin
pierce me for a purpose
unsanitary infections
pose me as a corpse for the camera
Published 22nd Mar 2018
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22nd Mar 2018 11:56am
damn it dearest Samael this dropped my heart
into my stomach..
"i can't let you go and i can't stay"
god how this hurts to read
I really don't know how to help at all..
i'm hurting with you..
love & hugs Brenda
into my stomach..
"i can't let you go and i can't stay"
god how this hurts to read
I really don't know how to help at all..
i'm hurting with you..
love & hugs Brenda
22nd Mar 2018 3:12pm
Dear Samael, I really can relate to these words and these lines:
"tasted of the earths dried leaves rolled in Miami "
I guess I love dried leaves, especially the Miami leaves.
"brushed your cheek with the back of my hand"
I guess it's the tenderest thing for a man to do for a woman. The vision is so romantic
"i can't let you go and i can't stay"
This is a very beautiful dilemma for two lovers to do in the room. Just interesting and painful!
"and so these walks i take remind me of Love
leaving their claw marks
as thrift shop lapel pins stuck through the skin"
At the situation, the claw marks and thrift shop lapel pins are profound enough to show how deep the love is. Really fresh imagery to express love.
Very well written! I love it!
much love
RoseJasmine
"tasted of the earths dried leaves rolled in Miami "
I guess I love dried leaves, especially the Miami leaves.
"brushed your cheek with the back of my hand"
I guess it's the tenderest thing for a man to do for a woman. The vision is so romantic
"i can't let you go and i can't stay"
This is a very beautiful dilemma for two lovers to do in the room. Just interesting and painful!
"and so these walks i take remind me of Love
leaving their claw marks
as thrift shop lapel pins stuck through the skin"
At the situation, the claw marks and thrift shop lapel pins are profound enough to show how deep the love is. Really fresh imagery to express love.
Very well written! I love it!
much love
RoseJasmine
