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Lifetimes
They say I knew you
before these brittle bones
formed in the womb
Your details were etched
into my subconcious psyche
before time was born
A double stranded helix
of spiralling DNA
beyond human memory
They say to me
in times of doubt
Validation isn't important
as knowing deep down
Nor should I worry
about proving
what already exists
But, instead, experience
each moment of Life
for what it is --
As children do
playing without proof
forgiving in Love
Before letting it go
so the next has room
to present itself
This, this is the only Truth
anyone need know
And all, through Lifetimes
we're meant to learn
~
before these brittle bones
formed in the womb
Your details were etched
into my subconcious psyche
before time was born
A double stranded helix
of spiralling DNA
beyond human memory
They say to me
in times of doubt
Validation isn't important
as knowing deep down
Nor should I worry
about proving
what already exists
But, instead, experience
each moment of Life
for what it is --
As children do
playing without proof
forgiving in Love
Before letting it go
so the next has room
to present itself
This, this is the only Truth
anyone need know
And all, through Lifetimes
we're meant to learn
~
Author's Note
For J, my greatest blessing of Love, Strength, and unwavering Belief. 🌞💜
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Re. Lifetimes
Anonymous
20th Mar 2018 3:01pm
It's an overwhelming feeling to have Life in this Universe summed up so succinctly. What you know is a reality you become seperated from in the search for proof of it. Source reminds us of this upon our return from being Lost.
Such wisdom passionately delivered, as I hear your voice on the wind of your words - Truths that have taken me a quarter of a century to absorb and comprehend; the fruition of understanding only harvested with your helping hand present in the plucking.
I Love You for gifting this in verse to me and everyone else. 💜💋
💑🌌
Such wisdom passionately delivered, as I hear your voice on the wind of your words - Truths that have taken me a quarter of a century to absorb and comprehend; the fruition of understanding only harvested with your helping hand present in the plucking.
I Love You for gifting this in verse to me and everyone else. 💜💋
💑🌌
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Re. Lifetimes
20th Mar 2018 5:40pm
Oh splendid, I love the way you’ve crafted the formatting! Such a beautiful message, you never disappoint =)
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20th Mar 2018 5:43pm
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20th Mar 2018 5:48pm
If you listen you'll hear the echoes from the above comments, for they are better than I could have phrased them.
Loved this piece, poetess.
Loved this piece, poetess.
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Re. Lifetimes
20th Mar 2018 7:05pm
A powerful message and perspective on understanding an almost indescribable feeling .
"This, this is the only Truth
anyone need know " Loved this line especially .
Great write .
"This, this is the only Truth
anyone need know " Loved this line especially .
Great write .
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20th Mar 2018 10:05pm
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25th Mar 2018 9:10pm
epic!!!!!! - you are so write - I have always seen it as a duty to better myself and my knowledge base and to pass that view on - I think you make it as a person if you are wiser than your parents and your kids are wiser than you :-))))
Inspiring write :-))))))))))
Inspiring write :-))))))))))
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25th Mar 2018 10:41pm
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26th Mar 2018 2:52pm
Nooooo! It'll be GREAT! 📝😂
We're about to unleash the prompts, which should help you! 😅
We're about to unleash the prompts, which should help you! 😅
Re. Lifetimes
26th Mar 2018 3:08pm
I love the staggered steps format, you're an architect and you didn't even know it lol.
wonderful spiritual write Ahavati
its a happy innocence feeling i'm left with for this piece.
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so we were born
etch a sketch needle penned it perfect
a Kings mountain roller coaster
they took a submarine to find out it was truly me in the flesh
yet we are all fictious
they grew bold as the world grew black at heart
yet we played necromancers and bards in backyards
space gave us spruce tree forests to follow our hearts
guiding
leaping before we second guessed this guise of life
wonderful spiritual write Ahavati
its a happy innocence feeling i'm left with for this piece.
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so we were born
etch a sketch needle penned it perfect
a Kings mountain roller coaster
they took a submarine to find out it was truly me in the flesh
yet we are all fictious
they grew bold as the world grew black at heart
yet we played necromancers and bards in backyards
space gave us spruce tree forests to follow our hearts
guiding
leaping before we second guessed this guise of life
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27th Mar 2018 00:52am
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29th Mar 2018 10:10pm
Ahavati, how do you do it? It's almost eerie synchronicity how you wrote this elegant, beautiful poem. It helps me delve into spiritual matters I am coming to terms with in my own life. Your strength, the guidance of your words... You bring me to tears in the best possible way :)
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29th Mar 2018 10:42pm
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31st Mar 2018 00:17am
Ahavati... Words cannot describe how beautiful this piece is. Written with such elegance and grace. A lot like an interwoven tapestry. Such amazing work from you as usual!!
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1st Apr 2018 12:55pm
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Anonymous
1st Apr 2018 2:21am
Bravo Ahavati!!! So much truth you speak in your words........wow what a thought provoking ink......luv it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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1st Apr 2018 12:57pm
Thank you, flowergirl. I'll take all the purple live and hugs you have to give. ((( 💜 )))
Re. Lifetimes
6th May 2018 7:42am
I was just leisurely reading and stumbled upon this beautifully written piece and had to log on to comment how lovely this scribe is. I love this!
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