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Rim Job Sally
ecclesiastical blowjob from a whore
who quit her day job
she gave all for free
lonely hooker prostituted her soul
so you would see
worldwide self promoting
understanding of a G
rise to the top
cos if you go looking round the block
you won't find me
don't call me by name
it isn't what it used to be
evolutionary resolution of the contrite
your vision is blurred so step off
if you use a glock to strong arm me
you won't get in with that key
I need a steady hand to disarm me
this isn't just talk
I'm down for real
claiming what's mine for eternity
I don't force my intentions
the door is open if you choose to enter
so smoothly come when you're not busy
cum creamy, easy, soft
hardcore ball buster from the South
this is a love affair
true Richter scale off the charts passion
can't bottle, buy, control
or sell
try bribing a mountain
get you nothing but more drama
stone doesn't talk
it crumbles
revealing what's precious
gold teeth I see you rockin
show stopper I fell for a dirty hustler
Published 7th Mar 2018
| Edited 8th Mar 2018
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7th Mar 2018 6:40pm
raw, emotion filled, sensual...compelling read...powerful words, as usual...excellent read
7th Mar 2018 7:02pm
Anonymous
7th Mar 2018 6:56pm
Woman, my ink
doesn`t even begin to compare to yours.
And that last stanza ~
Raw.
Edgy.
Truth.
That`s Brenda.
Excellent ink, as always.
p`s ... I still love you
7th Mar 2018 7:03pm
my Dark Queen i've missed you greatly.. your ink shines and draws me in deep no one compares to you.. you are divinely unique no other like you anywhere..
I love you lady..
thank you..
you honor me..
Brenda
I love you lady..
thank you..
you honor me..
Brenda
Anonymous
7th Mar 2018 7:18pm
My sentiments exactly;)
And you are so welcome!
7th Mar 2018 7:07pm
7th Mar 2018 7:11pm
thank you dearest Tim i'm so happy to bring you smiles you did so for me in return :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
7th Mar 2018 9:18pm
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8th Mar 2018 1:38am
I enjoyed this very much. To me, it shows a transition from vulnerability to strength, power, and self-awareness.
9th Mar 2018 5:18pm
thank you graciously Vinnie I love your interpretation it's very apt..
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
8th Mar 2018 2:42am
Brenda.. my sister, and goddess of poetry.. there is no one who even comes close.. you are simply brilliant, and beautiful.. and shine over all the stars, as the brightest.. i love you, so honored to be your brother.. just in awe of you..
Dave
Dave
9th Mar 2018 5:19pm
aw Dave i'm blushing my brother thank you graciously I love you my brother..
Brenda
Brenda
8th Mar 2018 1:59pm
Oh Crim, this is great. Raw, sassy ... real. Love your epic flow and cadence
9th Mar 2018 5:20pm
Anonymous
8th Mar 2018 6:24pm
Such raw truths bared and stripped down fiercely <3
9th Mar 2018 5:20pm
Anonymous
8th Mar 2018 6:35pm
there you go
pen shredding the drapes
not to let the light in
but to let the dark out...
this is pure fiya!!!
off the chain Brenda
pen shredding the drapes
not to let the light in
but to let the dark out...
this is pure fiya!!!
off the chain Brenda
9th Mar 2018 5:22pm
thank you dearest Naajir I absolutely adore and cherish your presence on my pages..
love Crim
love Crim
8th Mar 2018 9:44pm
Your pen is at it again.... Loving the gritty rawness to this and a this is what it is not what it was type of thing....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
9th Mar 2018 5:22pm
thank you beautiful Savvy One yes indeed dear one you're so right on..
love Crim
love Crim
8th Mar 2018 9:47pm
She's deeply sexy and dangerous to know
don't force my intentions
the door is open if you choose to enter
so smoothly come when you're not busy
cum creamy, easy, soft
Seems to me the choice is clear. Eroticism at its best...
don't force my intentions
the door is open if you choose to enter
so smoothly come when you're not busy
cum creamy, easy, soft
Seems to me the choice is clear. Eroticism at its best...
9th Mar 2018 5:24pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for the love on this write.. I cherish your visits..
love Crim
love Crim
10th Mar 2018 00:15am
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11th Mar 2018 1:27am
another awesome write that kicked the shit outta me in such a pleasant way :-))))))
you're the queen of DU - your talent is endless :-))) Huge Big Hugs :-))))))
you're the queen of DU - your talent is endless :-))) Huge Big Hugs :-))))))
16th Mar 2018 3:13am
