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Balance & Stalemate

sets the nights on fire
but her relentless mornings
are still lurking on

Written by takis1917

Published 4th Mar 2018

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Re. Balance & Stalemate

SweetOblivion

5th Mar 2018 6:43am

nicely done - I like your haikus

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takis1917

5th Mar 2018 3:49pm

Thank you! Appreciated it! First time experimenting with this form.

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Re. Balance & Stalemate

whynotmyra

5th Mar 2018 2:58pm

smooth

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takis1917

5th Mar 2018 3:49pm

Thank you!

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LilDragonFly

5th Mar 2018 3:19pm

Ah haikus ... my kryptonite

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takis1917

5th Mar 2018 3:50pm

Thank you!

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DanielChristensen (The Fire Elemental)

6th Mar 2018 4:43am

Perfect execution of haiku is always something to admire.

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takis1917

6th Mar 2018 12:42pm

Very generous of you, I appreciate it!

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