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Soul caressing
Now the time to gather our stones has come
The flowing nights that two souls will swim
We have pitched into the lovely dark waters
An ethereal write, our words can now begin...
Then by harvest trip into her consciousness
And the tunnel journey across her stargate
She lights the spiritual burning of my blood
But my symptom never wishing to shake...
The oblate sphere spins round her nature
With seraphic thought of her sweetest dew
By fate and furies we were brought together
As our ancient shrine now burns renewed...
My solar logos to her moonshine reflection
The move two in-phase as we jump in time
Her lunar rising to my setting sun dreaming
We float an embracing space and never mind...
Written by
runaway-mindtrain
Published 3rd Mar 2018
| Edited 28th Mar 2022
Author's Note
painting- William Blake
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Re. soul caressing
3rd Mar 2018 2:24am
dearest Jeff so much serenity
woven in this dreamy love poem
I felt ensconced in it's arms..
beautiful..
love Brenda
woven in this dreamy love poem
I felt ensconced in it's arms..
beautiful..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. soul caressing
3rd Mar 2018 2:41am
Re. soul caressing
How endearing this write is! It brought me tears when I read it second. I know you love watching "Stargate", and it magically fits to this vibe:
"Then by harvest trip into her consciousness
And the tunnel journey across her stargate
She lights the spiritual burning of my blood
But my symptom never wishing to shake..."
I know she is so happy reading this...
much love
RoseJasmine
"Then by harvest trip into her consciousness
And the tunnel journey across her stargate
She lights the spiritual burning of my blood
But my symptom never wishing to shake..."
I know she is so happy reading this...
much love
RoseJasmine
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Re. soul caressing
you made me smile....my sci-fi compulsion must be showing...a common affliction of nerds...thank you so much my lovely jasmine
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Re. soul caressing
4th Mar 2018 10:05pm
Such a hypnotic read on the path of love...Blake's painting was a perfect choice man.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. soul caressing
4th Mar 2018 10:42pm
thanks for the read my friend...yes, Blake was one of the best artist/writers to come out of romantic era England....mostly unknown in his time...
Jeff
Jeff
Re. soul caressing
5th Mar 2018 11:32am
Complete poetic seduction ... perfect rhythm ... perfect flow ... I feel like you ARE the sun to my moon ... beautiful ... timeless ... all I can do is ... sigh
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Re: Re. soul caressing
5th Mar 2018 12:34pm
Dearest Emily...the passionate heart senses all...you feel completely
thank you for the sweet words
love
Jeff
thank you for the sweet words
love
Jeff
Re. soul caressing
7th Mar 2018 5:04am
Such a sweetly written piece of art..
if I crown ms. crimsin as queen of darkness
you are the deeper KING of darkness
but you've portrayed sweet
beautiful heart and love in this work of words
*wonders off in the poem*
H
if I crown ms. crimsin as queen of darkness
you are the deeper KING of darkness
but you've portrayed sweet
beautiful heart and love in this work of words
*wonders off in the poem*
H
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Re: Re. soul caressing
7th Mar 2018 3:43pm
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8th Mar 2018 5:39am
"the deeper KING of darkness"....man that fuckin rocks....thanks love
you are the princess of shadows...
Jeff
you are the princess of shadows...
Jeff
Re. soul caressing
Anonymous
10th Mar 2018 4:58am
Hey Jeff......this is an amazing ink......beautiful phrasing thru out.......feeling very peaceful after reading this........outstanding.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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10th Mar 2018 5:03am
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27th Mar 2018 10:36pm
Re. soul caressing
31st Mar 2018 00:45am
I love absolutely everything about your poem. The metaphors paint a very clear picture, and a sense of peace and serenity fills my heart of the encounter and spiritual journey between two souls, mates or perhaps not. It's a window's view into the unknown.
Well done!
Well done!
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31st Mar 2018 1:50am
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14th Apr 2019 10:55pm
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A sigh from you truly makes it worth all the effort...
Thank you, my dear lovely friend,
Jefflington
Thank you, my dear lovely friend,
Jefflington
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Re: Re. soul caressing
15th Apr 2019 11:53am
A humbling comment, my dear.... Thank you so much for your sweet words ...
Love
Jeff
Love
Jeff
Re. soul caressing
11th Dec 2019 7:27am
Simply stunning. I cannot find the word's to describe how delicately balanced and beautiful this is Jeff.
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11th Dec 2019 9:43am