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Del Amitri Song Titles Haikus 7.0
(i) let's kiss this thing goodbye
Infidelity
she kisses my thing goodbye
with open razor
(ii) Spit in the rain
they spit out their hate
return hatred rains down on them
they reap what they sowed
(iii) Nothing Ever Happens
tried prostitutes
but nothing ever happens
My impotent cock
(iv) Always The Last To Know
it's when I am dead
I will be the last to know
because I'll be dead
(v) Tell Her
it is always best
to tell her well before she
meets your new girlfriend
(vi) Cry To Be Found
childhood raped by force
makes a lost adult who cries
sadly still not found
(vii) Medicine
Taken drugs do work
for control and compliance and
Lost humanity
Published 2nd Mar 2018
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4th Mar 2018 2:14pm
(ii) Spit in the rain
they spit out their hate
return hatred rains down on them
they reap what they sowed
Amen, David! Sow the wind and reap the whirlwind!
I honestly didn't want to like many of these, because I fo believe you to be found in love and caring. Though you may feel lost . . .
they spit out their hate
return hatred rains down on them
they reap what they sowed
Amen, David! Sow the wind and reap the whirlwind!
I honestly didn't want to like many of these, because I fo believe you to be found in love and caring. Though you may feel lost . . .
9th Mar 2018 1:11pm
thank you for your wise comment - i am indeed currently found in love and caring and that is my focus - I used to listen to Del Amitri about 10 years ago and the haikus reflect more on the time :-)))))))))
15th Mar 2018 2:09pm
But I have found you =) You are deeply loved my dear ❤️ So glad these things are in the past, soon we will create memories so bright they outshine.
This is a very creative comp challenge as well! Love and hugs for my handsome man 😘
This is a very creative comp challenge as well! Love and hugs for my handsome man 😘
16th Mar 2018 00:56am
Thank you hunny as always you are way too kind - glad you got that these were previous emotions and events - the future looks so much brighter <3 <3 <3
I love you to the moon and back <3
I love you to the moon and back <3
