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A Starry Night Wish
One starry starry night
I looked to the heavens and made a wish
For a true love to fulfill my life
But to this day true love has never come my way
Where in this lonely world is my chosen mate?
Is she a dusky dark eyed beauty from Bombay,
Or a pale blue-eyed woman from Norway?
If only I could find her before it’s too late
I’d move to the edge of the earth to be with her,
Hold her, love her, till the end of my last day
If only I knew where, if only the angels would share!
Till then I’ll keep looking up to the heavens at night
And wish upon every falling star for true love
Till the last star has fallen from the empty sky
I looked to the heavens and made a wish
For a true love to fulfill my life
But to this day true love has never come my way
Where in this lonely world is my chosen mate?
Is she a dusky dark eyed beauty from Bombay,
Or a pale blue-eyed woman from Norway?
If only I could find her before it’s too late
I’d move to the edge of the earth to be with her,
Hold her, love her, till the end of my last day
If only I knew where, if only the angels would share!
Till then I’ll keep looking up to the heavens at night
And wish upon every falling star for true love
Till the last star has fallen from the empty sky
Published 1st Mar 2018
Author's Note
My entry to 'Time the Ticking Clock' competition.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10140/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10140/
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10th Mar 2018 11:00pm
12th Mar 2018 6:59am
Thanks David.
Been meaning to drop you a note to congratulate you on your 'Night Bluebird' prompt.
What a great innovative poetry style you've created. You might want to consider compiling an anthology of Night Bluebird poems. My understanding that's how the gentleman who created 'Golden Shovel' style, kicked his form poetry into popularity.
Regardless, this was the most well received poetry styles I've ever seen in DU's competitions.
Again, congrats.
Been meaning to drop you a note to congratulate you on your 'Night Bluebird' prompt.
What a great innovative poetry style you've created. You might want to consider compiling an anthology of Night Bluebird poems. My understanding that's how the gentleman who created 'Golden Shovel' style, kicked his form poetry into popularity.
Regardless, this was the most well received poetry styles I've ever seen in DU's competitions.
Again, congrats.
5th Nov 2018 6:57pm
Great hope inspiring poem, snuggle. I like the descriptions used and the overall theme.
Thanks for participating in my competition!
Thanks for participating in my competition!
