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ricocheted thoughts from the edge
let crimson lips bleed truth
carve out the rotten
with wisdom bullet proof
my words weapons
that both protect and cut down
inside them there is shelter
a fortress to refuge
I am asylum
to the beaten and cast aside
they recognize my voice
it rings true
even to my own shame
I tell it like it is
with a razor tongue
I cut through my own bull
finding the heartbeat of the problem
and taking its pulse
my inner beasts I name
then call them to get in line
I won't take their shit
I've run out of time
no more games played on me
it's a fucking bore
I'm a full grown woman of the world
called to do damage
if you're so inclined
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Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
1st Mar 2018 3:53pm
Re: Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
2nd Mar 2018 11:11pm
Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
1st Mar 2018 4:25pm
powerful
in its delivery
and what it delievers Dear Raven!
yes.
expression.
the beauty of it is
it delivers right there
where it affects the reader
in its delivery
and what it delievers Dear Raven!
yes.
expression.
the beauty of it is
it delivers right there
where it affects the reader
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Re: Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
2nd Mar 2018 11:11pm
thank you graciously dearest Cold One
i'm so happy you found this effective..
love Raven
i'm so happy you found this effective..
love Raven
Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
1st Mar 2018 5:08pm
Wicked write here Raven, I’m chilled to the bone by your fierce confidence, and feel sheltered under your gorgeous dark wings <3
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Re: Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
2nd Mar 2018 11:12pm
thank you graciously beautiful Nightbird
i'm so happy you feel sheltered here close to me :)
love me..
i'm so happy you feel sheltered here close to me :)
love me..
Re: Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
2nd Mar 2018 11:13pm
thank you beautiful poetess
happy to see you here at du
look forward to reading you..
love Raven
happy to see you here at du
look forward to reading you..
love Raven
Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2018 00:04am
what power runs steady yet wild in this beast of a declaration formidably written, cut but not dry, i loved this
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Re: Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
2nd Mar 2018 11:14pm
thank you graciously dearest Sinister One
for feeling the power in my verse..
love Raven
for feeling the power in my verse..
love Raven
Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2018 4:52pm
Delivering your brand of smackdown right here, lovely Raven. Strong and open. I love it. :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
2nd Mar 2018 11:14pm
Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
30th Mar 2018 8:34am
taking full ownership
made it your business to live
above above your demons
"my inner beasts I name
then call them to get in line
I won't take their shit
I've run out of time
no more games played on me
it's a fucking bore
I'm a full grown woman of the world "
inventory of the soul taking
top priority...
made it your business to live
above above your demons
"my inner beasts I name
then call them to get in line
I won't take their shit
I've run out of time
no more games played on me
it's a fucking bore
I'm a full grown woman of the world "
inventory of the soul taking
top priority...
1
Re: Re. ricocheted thoughts from the edge
2nd Apr 2018 6:33am
thank you dearest Soul Soldier
wise words thank you my brother..
love Raven
wise words thank you my brother..
love Raven