Jehovah

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thank you dear one I'll look up that verse..

love Crim

Wonderful crims...we play the world chessboard...but it sometimes it is a game against ourselves

Love upon high
Jeff

thank you dearest Jeff true we are our own worst enemies at times.. I know i've been.. I appreciate the love deeply..

love Crim

"All that we are is the result of what we have thought: it is founded on our thoughts, it is made up of our thoughts." first lines of Dhammapada, sayings of Lord Buddha...perhaps it's time to grow beyond crippling mythology of totalitarian Christianity (designed by serial killing Emperor Constantine and bureaucratic 4th century Christian hierarchies)...as Jesus is quoted as saying 'The Kingdom of Heaven is within' & ' what I have done you can do also'...good read....

thank you dearest Lawrence you have so much knowledge and enlightened my mind.. while I don't prescribe to Christianity this title came to me I know one name doesn't capture the essence of the spirit properly that flows through so many.. i'm happy you enjoyed the read..

love Brenda

Wonderful contemplation dear. We all have to figure this battle out for ourselves.

thank you dearest Tim yes it's true  we all have a path to walk..though this is a bit of off road writing for me.. it came to me at a dark moment.. i'm not sure what it means honestly.. I appreciate the read deeply..

love Brenda

Truly beautiful <3

He can take your heat, remember that. All of the angst, pain, anger, coming to realization and crushing admittance...

This is going into my RL.

thank you beautiful Atomik One this spirit has been taking the heat from me for years this is a moment of strength for me because I was able to post and share my vulnerability..I really didn't want to post this but I  believe we are all on a journey and sharing this weak moment was part of mine..

that you embraced me still means the world..

love Brenda

So many ?'s and so many answers do we search for...a beautiful spiritual poem Crim.
Cheers...Harry

thank you dearest Harry yes i'm just beginning my spiritual journey I know there are spirits guiding us to a more awakened place sometimes it just takes a quieting of the mind to get there..

I deeply appreciate your presence here..

love Brenda

Powerful poem Brenda as usual you are such a good wordsmith, I bow to your talent - However I just cant see you as a mans rib :-)

The Wooly Babble - David 15:7 Verily I say unto you there is  none that rejoiceth in heaven because it existeth not.
..................................................God, Jehovah, Mohamed, Thor, Odin, Zeus, Apollo, Spiderman, Batman, Superman
.................................................. [8] Any of these could have had created me - but they didn't, my evil parents did

Huge massive Hugs :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

David really I don't know what or who this spirit is.. I just know it talks to me it always has I've felt it's power and been nearly broken by it.. i've been silent because of my mental health as of late.. now it's simply inspiration that is silent I always go where she leads even if I don't like it.. well this is where she led today and honestly you know I prefer the dark but I know from experience if I refuse to speak for her she will offer me her silence in return so there it is..

love & hugs Brenda

thank you beautiful Dani you are always so insightful this spirit is my guide through the darkness and the light I go where it leads.. I deeply appreciate the love you've shown me always.. as for doing better no but I love you for saying so.. we each of us are one a journey that i'm grateful to walk along side you all..

love you lady..

Brenda

aw thank you beautiful :)

you warmed my heart lovely heart sister..

love Brenda

I like what you say above about silencing the dark.  I try to do the same, but it keeps getting the upper hand.  Mostly.  Love your lines as always Crim.

thank you dearest Sir Crow it's a struggle my friend blocking out the dark but somehow I believe even it has its place in the universe so I embrace it when it comes and run if I get too scared :)

love Crim

Dear Brenda, because of or in spite of the many layers of what the creation of this poem means to you (even as you try to analyze this very thing in the aftermath), I figuratively jumped up from my seat high in the rafters, to wildly wave, whoop & holler when I heard you exclaim:  
 
“check mate  
 
Jehovah God our maker  
I'll admit you created me”  
 
Not just because of what you said, but after such a building up in your verse!  And it’s not because of only one objective... but many shades, dark & light, and all of the corresponding emotions.  
 
I’m getting carried away, so suffice it to finish by saying that you’ve offered us a compelling write that I added to my RL before I could even  catch my breath!  
 
Much pen respect, & my best,  
Jade xo

thank you beautiful Jade for not only embracing this write but for seeing the layers here.. your enthusiasm is contagious you have me smiling ear to ear :)

love Brenda