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Void
We can get lost inside of our thoughts
But after a time our mind will be forced
To make a choice and find our voice
Or be trapped forever inside of the void
A question
A lesson
Unutterable message
Suppress the intention
Percentage position
Submission or wishes
Your decision is precious
Incense the essence
Or suffer suppression
Personas regression
The lesson: a mission
Control your conclusion
Intrepid decision
Precision intrusion
A confused illusion
To stifle succession
Oppression's possession
If you get lost inside of your thoughts
Remember the ones who will steal your force
Takin your steam with no remorse
You don't have a choice, you've lost your voice
And you'll reside inside of the void
Intentions a weapon
Success a life sentence
Quell the depression
Or fail the final lesson
Perhaps it's a blessing
Your quest to repress then
Becomes your own sham
When your forced to abandon
The thoughts in your head
The futures been written
While the writings in your hand
Something else had controlled them
And then,
When something controls what you think friend
The void expands and the gateway opens
The answer? A cancer
The reply? A lie
The reaction? Abstraction
The lie...
Verified
But after a time our mind will be forced
To make a choice and find our voice
Or be trapped forever inside of the void
A question
A lesson
Unutterable message
Suppress the intention
Percentage position
Submission or wishes
Your decision is precious
Incense the essence
Or suffer suppression
Personas regression
The lesson: a mission
Control your conclusion
Intrepid decision
Precision intrusion
A confused illusion
To stifle succession
Oppression's possession
If you get lost inside of your thoughts
Remember the ones who will steal your force
Takin your steam with no remorse
You don't have a choice, you've lost your voice
And you'll reside inside of the void
Intentions a weapon
Success a life sentence
Quell the depression
Or fail the final lesson
Perhaps it's a blessing
Your quest to repress then
Becomes your own sham
When your forced to abandon
The thoughts in your head
The futures been written
While the writings in your hand
Something else had controlled them
And then,
When something controls what you think friend
The void expands and the gateway opens
The answer? A cancer
The reply? A lie
The reaction? Abstraction
The lie...
Verified
Published 27th Feb 2018
| Edited 4th Mar 2018
Author's Note
This is one of my shorter ones ( short meaning I wrote it in a very short time). I think the structure and wordplay of that first verse is wickid!
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1st Mar 2018 9:11am
interesting poem, although i do not completely understand the meaning to this poem , i did enjoy reading and i like the words used and the way this was layed out.
Thank you. Honestly there are a few things about how I write that I think a lot of writers (especially classically trained ones)...wouldn't like...maybe? For example, I remember writing this in an hr or so on a day off. It just came out and I don't totally understand it either...haha, gulp. Or just the way I write in general, not like actually poetry. Way too long and like hip hop lyrics. That's prob the old childhood insecurities tho. Writing like this happens to me sometimes ( the writing really fast thing) I actually posted one today like this... I'm not sure if this happens to other writers. In any event, thanx again and xiexie😀
10th Mar 2018 9:59pm
you poem spoke to me of standing up for yourself or else get swallowed up by the blinded majority that live in the void - they become void of humanity and compassion :-(
Another excellent write :-))))
Another excellent write :-))))
11th Mar 2018 8:57pm
Your awesome man! You always seem to get and appreciate my messages. Thank you so much!
