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Planet Fred
Bang bang
You're dead
Said Fred
As he then
Shot a bullet (of lead)
Into his head
(And thus remained unwed)
An alien species were watching, and decided not to visit planet Fred
Their name for Earth)
And decided to go elsewhere for their holiday
so they chose URanus instead!
Three times the size
Of planet Fred!
by Jemia
You're dead
Said Fred
As he then
Shot a bullet (of lead)
Into his head
(And thus remained unwed)
An alien species were watching, and decided not to visit planet Fred
Their name for Earth)
And decided to go elsewhere for their holiday
so they chose URanus instead!
Three times the size
Of planet Fred!
by Jemia
Published 22nd Feb 2018
| Edited 14th Apr 2025
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23rd Feb 2018 00:13am
Nice ...
Open minded...
There is work to be done in readying planet Fred for alien visits.
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Open minded...
There is work to be done in readying planet Fred for alien visits.
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