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Stall.
There were bees
unbuzzing
weaving what weren't
marks
between tousled
stalks;
dead dandelions
dip - aloft
Unlanding
on
fluff - the yellow tufts
droop;
eversoft
Author's Note
Couldn't come up with something that wasn't trite to make a decent note; it's cliche, but I'm ready for spring...
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Re. Stall.
12th Feb 2018 11:48pm
beautiful Atomik this is vivid
with delightful imagery..
wonderful..
love Crim
with delightful imagery..
wonderful..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Stall.
12th Feb 2018 11:50pm
Thank you very much, I've been taking a pause from the dark things lately :) (not that dark is wrong of course..well, you know me...)
Re: Re. Stall.
12th Feb 2018 11:52pm
I understand beautiful Atomik
all things in balance..
wonderful write..
love Crim
all things in balance..
wonderful write..
love Crim
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Re. Stall.
13th Feb 2018 00:25am
got that 'haiku' quality in pointed brevity. You never cease to amaze me.....[so there!]
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Re. Stall.
13th Feb 2018 00:26am
So am I. It's been a rough Texas Winter. I am refreshed by the scene you've painted.
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Re: Re. Stall.
13th Feb 2018 1:05am
Thank you. Yes, February and August are the hardest month for me personally. I'm sick of the dark, or sick of the muggy heat.
It's still beautiful, but it's an "antsy" time. Was Texas super cold this year?
It's still beautiful, but it's an "antsy" time. Was Texas super cold this year?
Re: Re. Stall.
13th Feb 2018 1:31am
It was and continues to be...for Texas. In December and January we dipped in the 20's and it snowed one day quite heavily. In what state are you? March, April, and October are my fav months
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Re: Re. Stall.
13th Feb 2018 3:21pm
I'm in western WA, which is uncharacteristically cold right now :( It's been in the 20s (at least at night too). I'd still take this over weather in the 90s (I hate heat) but I'm growing a bit sick of it.
Those are beautiful months! I love April-May, then Sept-Oct here :)
Those are beautiful months! I love April-May, then Sept-Oct here :)
Re: Re. Stall.
I would love to move to the Northwest. I am from the San Francisco Bay Area originally. I hate with a passion the Texas heat and frankly the macho attitude as well.
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Re. Stall.
13th Feb 2018 1:42am
I love the unbuzzing and unlanding. I enjoy the "non" feel looming over this.it also makes me want to listen to "flight of the bumble bee" by Nikolai Rimsky-Korsakov .
Good writing AtoMik.
Good writing AtoMik.
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Re: Re. Stall.
13th Feb 2018 3:22pm
Re. Stall.
Nature is always the respite the soul craves. Wondetful offering, AtoMikOne. 📝❤
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Re. Stall.
14th Feb 2018 2:10am
Re. Stall.
17th Feb 2018 8:41pm
wow - this made me start to miss my forest again and I felt I was in your poem :-)))))
thank you for sharing this smile :-)))))))))
thank you for sharing this smile :-)))))))))
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