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fated love
you never know when it will come
or how it will appear
but fate comes to claim her own
she's tender in nature
sometimes unsettling
for those who fear the unknown
all is known to her
she sees our predestined path
the hour & the day
we are to be at a given time
it's her duty to be sure
we are there as destined
her hands are gentle & encouraging
holding us as we take our first steps
into the unknown
watching on like a proud mother
as we take baby steps
towards the love of our future
he's there waiting for you
I see him my love
waiting patiently for you to arrive
his heart's desire
& answer to a prayer
you already know him
though his face isn't revealed to me
I know you will be loved
as the Goddess you are
so very passionately
his sexual hunger rivals your own
soon my love you will be home
Author's Note
Copyright © 2018 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
for my beautiful Taryn who I will always love
i'm so happy you were fated to be part of my life..
I love you.
for my beautiful Taryn who I will always love
i'm so happy you were fated to be part of my life..
I love you.
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Re. fated love
Anonymous
9th Feb 2018 6:07pm
Beautiful Dark Angel, you had me clapping and grinning at this one. Such beautiful imagery and to see her held in love as she so deserves will be a treasured moment witnessed. Won't it be wonderful to see our girl wrapped in love?? I love you, gorgeous
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. fated love
9th Feb 2018 6:35pm
thank you beautiful Willow most graciously for such an enthusiastic response to this write.. she is deserving of a home coming at last in her love's sweet embrace,,
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. fated love
9th Feb 2018 6:11pm
Re: Re. fated love
9th Feb 2018 6:36pm
thank you graciously dearest Tim she is easy to write for so brave she is in her journey that my muse longs to speak to her..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. fated love
9th Feb 2018 6:27pm
i hope you don't mind but I'm sharing this with my bestie who has just met the first person to love her unconditionally & it really was kismet that their paths aligned.
i absolutely love this, beautiful one
xoxoxox
i absolutely love this, beautiful one
xoxoxox
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Re: Re. fated love
9th Feb 2018 6:30pm
hello beautiful one so good to see you :)
yes of course share it I would be honored
I truly believe fate has us cross the paths
of those we were intended to..
I love you..
Brenda
yes of course share it I would be honored
I truly believe fate has us cross the paths
of those we were intended to..
I love you..
Brenda
Re. fated love
Anonymous
9th Feb 2018 6:36pm
Sheer beauty. Joy to read Crim. The journey can be harrowing, but along the crooked path, there is treasure to be found.
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Re: Re. fated love
9th Feb 2018 6:39pm
thank you dearest Rob for such a beautifully gracious comment.. treasure indeed :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. fated love
Anonymous
9th Feb 2018 7:05pm
With love like this behind her she’s set to soar.
Beautiful <3
Beautiful <3
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Re: Re. fated love
9th Feb 2018 7:09pm
Re. fated love
Anonymous
9th Feb 2018 8:54pm
Wow she's.gorgeous
Glad she has.someone like you to help her on her journey
Great dedication great lines!
Love Autumn
Glad she has.someone like you to help her on her journey
Great dedication great lines!
Love Autumn
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Re: Re. fated love
9th Feb 2018 9:05pm
thank you beautiful Gypsy she is a gorgeous lady inside & out i'm just happy to be part of her journey..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. fated love
Anonymous
10th Feb 2018 4:42am
My love, the messages the Fates have been bringing to you have been ones which cause heart to swell out of my chest...I certainly hope these visions are ones which come to fruition...please, please...when you see his face, let me know...the suspense is killing me ;)
Thank you so very much for this and for always gifting me with such lovely poetry to hold onto...it will last until forever, just as my love for you will....
I love you madly, deeply
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
Thank you so very much for this and for always gifting me with such lovely poetry to hold onto...it will last until forever, just as my love for you will....
I love you madly, deeply
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
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Re: Re. fated love
11th Feb 2018 1:14am
thank you my love i'm so happy to have been fated to be a part of your life for now & always.. when I see his face clearly you'll be the first to know..
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
Re. fated love
10th Feb 2018 2:04pm
Sweet Brenda, such a beautiful vision of hope for a sister so special to you! May the Fates bring her closer to her heart's desire and fulfill all the love she deserves <3
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Re: Re. fated love
11th Feb 2018 1:16am
thank you graciously beautiful Nightbird the visions for her future are full of love & promise for someone who has been on a great journey..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. fated love
18th Feb 2018 12:17pm
with friends like that!...everyone wins...you two are like peas and carrots on a big spoon floating through the sky to erotic mountain...laughin' and huggin'
so cute
Jeff
so cute
Jeff
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1st Mar 2018 1:16pm
Re. fated love
23rd Feb 2018 7:54am
such a wonderful write for a wonderful poet - I hope you are right and she gets all the love that she desires; she surly deserves it :-)))))))
Huge big Hugs :-)))))))))
Huge big Hugs :-)))))))))
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Re: Re. fated love
1st Mar 2018 1:17pm
thank you graciously dearest David I believe in my heart fate is taking care of her :)
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
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27th Feb 2018 8:22pm
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1st Mar 2018 1:18pm