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Re. Summer Harvest
7th Feb 2018 3:09pm
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7th Feb 2018 3:10pm
Re. Summer Harvest
7th Feb 2018 4:07pm
A beautiful poem, Jade. It really instills a sense of peace in the reader.
Well done!
Well done!
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My grateful thanks, dear Luna, for embracing my visual free verse, and feeling the peace that drifted over a weary poet late one night as the piece initially came to me.
Re: Re. Summer Harvest
7th Feb 2018 4:21pm
You're very welcome. One often only finds peace in the silence of night.
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Anonymous
7th Feb 2018 4:49pm
On a freezing cold day, this brought a slice of sunshine & warmth, bathed in an orange glow.
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7th Feb 2018 4:57pm
I'm so very glad the sensation & imagery came together to help take you out of the chilblains of your day, dear Trouble. Be well, be safe, and thank you for sharing with me.
Re. Summer Harvest
Anonymous
7th Feb 2018 5:19pm
Beautifully put into words. A delightful read. :)
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7th Feb 2018 5:33pm
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Anonymous
7th Feb 2018 5:39pm
Thank you for the kind welcome. :)
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Re. Summer Harvest
8th Feb 2018 00:05am
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8th Feb 2018 7:58am
Why thanks so much, Tyler, for stopping by for a read and to share that with me. And if I haven’t said this yet, welcome to DUP!
Re. Summer Harvest
8th Feb 2018 2:53am
This is really pretty, it sounds like it could be about the ' summer of love ' and I love the symbolism of the picture with it, especially the flowers on her skirt..
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Re: Re. Summer Harvest
8th Feb 2018 8:06am
Thank you dear, I’m glad you like this piece, words & picture. And I feel the exact same way about that image because the pattern of the skirt seems to be sprouting right out of the ground!
Re. Summer Harvest
8th Feb 2018 6:08am
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8th Feb 2018 8:20am
Re. Summer Harvest
8th Feb 2018 8:32pm
Re: Re. Summer Harvest
UPDATE:
The poem now appears in text right under the image entry in your current competition, so now it's accessible for you.
And thank you for your comment. 🙂
The poem now appears in text right under the image entry in your current competition, so now it's accessible for you.
And thank you for your comment. 🙂
Re. Summer Harvest
8th Feb 2018 8:51pm
What a beautiful, graceful write... Adoring how the verse and picture work together... Excellent write, Miss Tiger...💗💗💗
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Ah, thank you so much dear Tommy for enjoying & giving my visual poem a place of honor in your recommends! (Tiger smile)🐯❣️
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Anonymous
10th Feb 2018 5:13am
was feeling a bit unpeaceful the last few days,
but must thank you for giving me a taste of
serene's dew. ..it was more than needed...
all my love sweetie..
but must thank you for giving me a taste of
serene's dew. ..it was more than needed...
all my love sweetie..
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((((tender hugs))))
Oh my dearest, thank you for sharing that. I’m grateful my visual write gave you comfort & sanctuary during a challenging day!
🎼In harmony
Oh my dearest, thank you for sharing that. I’m grateful my visual write gave you comfort & sanctuary during a challenging day!
🎼In harmony
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Anonymous
14th Feb 2018 6:42pm
Just beautiful serenity emanates from your poem. So very lovely.
Well done.
Well done.
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Re: Re. Summer Harvest
14th Feb 2018 8:36pm
With my sincerest thanks, dear Ani, for embracing the spirit of my visual verse, and sharing that with me.
Re. Summer Harvest
26th Feb 2018 2:54am
I was hoping for interpersonal romance. I like this unique romance of nature, especially with your personification in stanzas 3 and 4.
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Re. Summer Harvest
Thank you for your feedback, sirB. Actually, it’s the last two lines of the poem that reveal a move toward an interpersonal romance.🙂