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Skimming the surface

Look how beautuful and still
The surface is
You can see your reflection
A mirror false
Once touched sends countless
Ripples

A finger tip penetrating
Is all it took for him
To look up at her in dismay,
How could she do such a thing?
Disrupt the perfect image
And with a smile no less

A test of resilience
To see how far she could
Make the ripples run,
She wondered how long
It would take for him to go
Once things went a little deeper

A finger tip is all it took,
All that depth still waiting to be
Discovered, and suddenly he had
No interest,
She felt a sudden lightness
At his departure,

Knowing how few men
Have ever dared to swim
In her deep waters
It was time for him to go,
And she let him
Written by jemac
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