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(Un)Soulitude
Her heart is restless
She wrestles between two worlds
Both steal her life force
She wrestles between two worlds
Both steal her life force
Published 8th Feb 2018
Author's Note
There are days when I fall. It seems inevitable. Where everything just sucks, and sucks the life out. But, the regrouping is getting easier. And even that can be scary sometimes. Losing the man that I loved is the hardest lesson I have ever known. I know Heaven/ the outer realm, has been rewarded with his beautiful soul.
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9th Feb 2018 2:01am
This is as clever as it is beautiful. 📝💕
One day you will balance, JeJe. . .and the force will quell as waves at sea.
One day you will balance, JeJe. . .and the force will quell as waves at sea.
9th Feb 2018 11:08am
Heartbreak can be brutal and feel like it tears us in two. No matter how many times we fall though... we have to get back up and try to carry on. I’m glad it’s getting easier for you, but I do also understand that even that can be scary sometimes, as though we’re leaving some part of us behind.
I’m sorry for your loss... stay strong poetess. Though sad, this is a beautiful haiku.
I’m sorry for your loss... stay strong poetess. Though sad, this is a beautiful haiku.
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2018 5:46pm
I'm sorry for your loss
I hope that you can live on with I'm in your heart....
This was a beautiful piece...
I applaud thee
Well done
Love Autumn
I hope that you can live on with I'm in your heart....
This was a beautiful piece...
I applaud thee
Well done
Love Autumn
3rd Mar 2018 9:57pm
A simple, yet perfect way to describe heartbreak. The narrator's caught between following her heart's desire and listening to her inner rationality.
Excellent work!
Excellent work!
