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carpe noctem
the night ached
it felt my loneliness
my sore spots exposed
it wept for my sorrow
then covered me with stars
so my naked pain wouldn't show
he spoke to me quietly
said all would soon be revealed
inside your dreams
secrets are told
the key to my way out
is in my hand
i have to just unlock the door
walk through it into tomorrow
instead of living
in yesterday's shadow
he spoke in a hushed tone
of a matter of importance
said the winds of fate
were blowing in my favor
don't fear where it may lead
your heart has been held captive
to a darkness you can't see
your freedom on the horizon
just step into the promised land
don't forsake yourself
for the happiness of others
learn your own truth
not shadowed by another
be the woman
the gods called you to be
stand true & strong
then you will see
your happiness flourish
give yourself over to love
don't fear its tender touch
you are my Goddess
so don't forget
what the night always remembers
you're my love of forever
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Copyright © 2018 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
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Re. carpe noctem
Anonymous
6th Feb 2018 5:04pm
Oh my beautiful Dark Angel, this is such a compassionate and loving poem and I read your darling girl all over this one. Whether it was intended for her or not, it speaks to me of her. Your voice is so warm and sweet, my lovely one. I love you, so much
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow

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thank you beautiful Willow you're very perceptive this message was given to me & I didn't understand its meaning so I asked our beautiful one & she said the message was for her.. I feel happy to have been able to bring it to her..
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. carpe noctem
Anonymous
6th Feb 2018 6:30pm
My love...at the very point of reading this I felt as if I was receiving a gift straight from The Fates as they used you as the vessel to deliver it to me because of our bond...such loving words spoken in such a warm voice...I will be keeping hold of this, another one I shall print and hang on my wall of my new home with others holding such love within them...thank you so much for your love, your support, always holding my hand tightly with fingers intertwined...
I love you passionately and will until the end of time
yours always and forever
xoxoxox Taryn
I love you passionately and will until the end of time
yours always and forever
xoxoxox Taryn

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6th Feb 2018 6:35pm
thank you my love as you know it was mysterious to me the meaning of this write.. until we spoke & it's message was revealed to you.. I prayed to the gods this morning for a write & we were both gifted.. yes we share a special bond the fates had us intersect for their purposes.. I treasure & love you..
I love you passionately always..
love Brenda
I love you passionately always..
love Brenda
Re. carpe noctem
Anonymous
6th Feb 2018 8:41pm
What an uplifting love poem u have here...very inspirational...
Lovn this dear crimsin
Lovn this dear crimsin

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7th Feb 2018 00:00am
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Anonymous
6th Feb 2018 10:20pm
Crim, this is absolutely a treasure to behold.

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7th Feb 2018 00:00am
Re. carpe noctem
7th Feb 2018 6:04am
Dear Lord, this is full of rich and saturated treasure, into the RL it goes!
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9th Feb 2018 3:06am
thank you graciously beautiful Atomik love your response to this write you gifted me smiles :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. carpe noctem
16th Feb 2018 7:03am
"your heart has been held captive
to a darkness you can't see
your freedom on the horizon
just step into the promised land
don't forsake yourself
for the happiness of others
learn your own truth
not shadowed by another"
this is wonderful stuff Crims...your huge heart is always there...even when the dark is sexy
love
-Jeff
to a darkness you can't see
your freedom on the horizon
just step into the promised land
don't forsake yourself
for the happiness of others
learn your own truth
not shadowed by another"
this is wonderful stuff Crims...your huge heart is always there...even when the dark is sexy
love
-Jeff
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1st Mar 2018 1:36pm
thank you graciously Jeff you gifted me smiles with your comment :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. carpe noctem
23rd Feb 2018 8:59am
a truly beautiful poem of love :-)))))))))
you are my Goddess
so don't forget
what the night always remembers
you're my love of forever - - - this is beauty x infinity :-)))))) - Huge massive Hugs
you are my Goddess
so don't forget
what the night always remembers
you're my love of forever - - - this is beauty x infinity :-)))))) - Huge massive Hugs
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1st Mar 2018 1:37pm
aw David thank you graciously so happy you liked this one :)
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re. carpe noctem
27th Feb 2018 3:02pm
Seize the night, seize the opportunity for love, seize the chance to be who you were meant to be! Very positive and uplifting write Brenda!
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1st Mar 2018 1:38pm
thank you dearest Xmar indeed we must seize the night may she bless us :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. carpe noctem
27th Feb 2018 3:02pm
Seize the night, seize the opportunity for love, seize the chance to be who you were meant to be! Very positive and uplifting write Brenda!
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1st Mar 2018 1:38pm