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FIVE SENSES
(A repost)
I thrill to hear your voice
laden with love and acceptance
your whispers like wind chimes
excited by a breeze
calming my soul
your laughter
enlivening my spirit
moans of delight
when we reach deep places
Your touch, warm and electric
tingles on my skin
heaven is near
when your lips meet mine
in naked embrace
time stands still
the weight of life’s problems
are replaced
with the euphoria
of our unified flesh
There is no sight happier
than your smile beaming
as a glorious sunrise
when away
i miss nothing more
than to gaze into your eyes
reading my every emotion
mesmerized I am
looking on your perfect breasts
my eyes require no more exercise
than to trace the lines
of your every feminine curve
Enthralled I am by your essence
breathing in the fruity scent
of your lustrous hair
draping down tickling my face
when you draw near
the sweet smell
of your warm breath
guides me to your
succulent lips
allured by your favorite perfume
I hunger for your romance
I crave no fragrance more
than the womanly musk
of your hot house flower
inebriated by it’s aroma
igniting my carnal desire
soon replaced by the heady scent
of our lover’s cocktail
The taste of you
so exquisite
yet so difficult to describe
your salty tears
when overcome with emotion
the waxy taste of your lipstick
sometimes flavored
the subtle, clean taste of your soap
when kissing your skin
or suckling your nipples
the sweet, spicy tang
of your flowing nectar
on my tongue
and fingers
By you my senses are awakened
made more aware
of beauty all around
by you I am come alive
I thrill to hear your voice
laden with love and acceptance
your whispers like wind chimes
excited by a breeze
calming my soul
your laughter
enlivening my spirit
moans of delight
when we reach deep places
Your touch, warm and electric
tingles on my skin
heaven is near
when your lips meet mine
in naked embrace
time stands still
the weight of life’s problems
are replaced
with the euphoria
of our unified flesh
There is no sight happier
than your smile beaming
as a glorious sunrise
when away
i miss nothing more
than to gaze into your eyes
reading my every emotion
mesmerized I am
looking on your perfect breasts
my eyes require no more exercise
than to trace the lines
of your every feminine curve
Enthralled I am by your essence
breathing in the fruity scent
of your lustrous hair
draping down tickling my face
when you draw near
the sweet smell
of your warm breath
guides me to your
succulent lips
allured by your favorite perfume
I hunger for your romance
I crave no fragrance more
than the womanly musk
of your hot house flower
inebriated by it’s aroma
igniting my carnal desire
soon replaced by the heady scent
of our lover’s cocktail
The taste of you
so exquisite
yet so difficult to describe
your salty tears
when overcome with emotion
the waxy taste of your lipstick
sometimes flavored
the subtle, clean taste of your soap
when kissing your skin
or suckling your nipples
the sweet, spicy tang
of your flowing nectar
on my tongue
and fingers
By you my senses are awakened
made more aware
of beauty all around
by you I am come alive
Published 3rd Feb 2018
| Edited 4th Feb 2018
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4th Feb 2018 5:32am
Very well written with nice metaphors.
The absence of crass language adds
to the class of the piece, letting it
stand as a romantic and sensuous
write to be proud of.
Excellently done, Bob
The absence of crass language adds
to the class of the piece, letting it
stand as a romantic and sensuous
write to be proud of.
Excellently done, Bob
Teri, thank you so much! To use crass language would, for me, make a spiritual, romantic thing base and strictly animal sex.
Anonymous
4th Feb 2018 3:27pm
A very romantic piece that breathes the strength of love.
4th Feb 2018 3:31pm
Thank you Ani! I'm so glad you see that strength in the piece. I am happy you like my work.
Anonymous
5th Feb 2018 5:44pm
Such a romantic piece dearest Bob.
I sincerely appreciate your words of encouragement...thank you. This one's kinda my sensual version of "Raindrops on Roses."
7th Feb 2018 9:36pm
Oh wow, someone's got to cool me down! Haha. This was a very sensual poem, yet without the need of having to use vulgar terms. It was very easy to visualize, and that's what gets a woman all hot and bothered!
Well done, Gahddess!
Well done, Gahddess!
7th Feb 2018 11:08pm
I am so glad you like the piece, Luna. I think we all deserve some sensuality in our lives . I try to concentrate on the natural beauty of what is sensual. No wham bam here :) Thank you son much for your kind words.
Anonymous
28th Mar 2020 9:32pm
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28th Mar 2020 10:49pm
*blush* I am definitely humbled by your enthusiasm. I don't know why but the stuff just flow through me. ☺️
28th Mar 2020 11:31pm
*blush* I am definitely humbled by your enthusiasm. I don't know why but the stuff just flow through me. ☺️ Katja and I colab'd on a naughtier piece, https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/165681-well-ill-be-hogtied-and-stuffed-with/
And one of my others: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/315693-too-hot-for-sex/
And one of my others: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/315693-too-hot-for-sex/
