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The Generous Whore
(Night Bluebird format)
The guys are awestruck
For words they are stuck
Like every good fuck
She knows how to suck
On any poor schmuck
Who’s down on his luck
Can you spare a buck
When life runs amuck
For Monday potluck
Instead of the chuck
And leftover duck
That’s dry as a puck
Whose quack lost its cluck
And no one could pluck
That’s when she had struck
Idea and snuck
Inside of a truck
Where he’s thunderstruck
When she starts to shuck
Her john’s nip & tuck!
The guys are awestruck
For words they are stuck
Like every good fuck
She knows how to suck
On any poor schmuck
Who’s down on his luck
Can you spare a buck
When life runs amuck
For Monday potluck
Instead of the chuck
And leftover duck
That’s dry as a puck
Whose quack lost its cluck
And no one could pluck
That’s when she had struck
Idea and snuck
Inside of a truck
Where he’s thunderstruck
When she starts to shuck
Her john’s nip & tuck!
Published 3rd Feb 2018
Author's Note
This was written for and entered in the DUP competition “Night Bluebird” which is a style of poetry (based on any genre) created by the host, our own David Macleod.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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3rd Feb 2018 9:44am
Good!
Thank you, dizzz, that makes me smile loudly to see how well you joined into the spirit of my wee contribution! 😘🐯👍
Thank you, dizzz, that makes me smile loudly to see how well you joined into the spirit of my wee contribution! 😘🐯👍
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2018 9:50am
Clever. Like the staccato rhythm too.
Why thank you, dear Trouble, for enjoying my piece by moving in sync with its erotic pace. 💃🏻🐯🕺🏻
3rd Feb 2018 9:59am
I thought those ladies hang'in around the truck stops were sexy, in a naughty sorta way, diesel pump attendants. Now I know better. Fun poem to read, Jadey! Brava!
Ah, thank you my friend! Yes, after letting it settle for some hours after I pm’d you in reply about not being sure if I would publish it, I personally read it for Hepcat61. His reaction as he guffawd with glee convinced moi to publish it as soon as I returned! I’m glad I did, and sharing your own unique reaction is such a pleasure! 😇🐯😈
What a special gift - your reading of the poem. And it did make me laugh... This brings such joy to my heart... Brava, Tiger, Brava! RL'd for sure!
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Aah yes, tommycat, you know how much I enjoyed reciting this, and if I hadn’t, it still would be in published. So you just never know when you take a chance afterall. And once again, thank you for honoring my effort with a place on your RL!
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3rd Feb 2018 1:55pm
3rd Feb 2018 2:06pm
Lol, indeed, dear Tim! And thanks for stopping by for a read & express, I’m always glad to see you, and to know that you enjoy something I’ve penned. 🐯✍️
3rd Feb 2018 3:35pm
Why thank you, poetrician, nice to meet you. That's terribly kind of you to share that with me, and for stopping by for a read.🐾🐯
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Mar 2024 6:45am
3rd Feb 2018 3:38pm
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Ah dear Avalon, thank you for giving me your thoughts on this rather unorthodox albeit playfully naughty write of mine! I enjoyed attempting the style so much that I was challenging myself with my own challenge within the challenge in the way I I chose to express certain excerpts of the piece! I hope that makes sense. ;p
And thanks for your good wishes regarding the competition. However it comes out, it was lots of fun to participate and see how not only I but how the other entrants addressed the theme. And I bet you could do it if you focus on what you want to express, and practice on several rhyme schemes till one lets you find the words that help you best. This was my third attempt, the one I finally used for my entry. Once I found it the rest came to me in a short time! 🐾🐯
And thanks for your good wishes regarding the competition. However it comes out, it was lots of fun to participate and see how not only I but how the other entrants addressed the theme. And I bet you could do it if you focus on what you want to express, and practice on several rhyme schemes till one lets you find the words that help you best. This was my third attempt, the one I finally used for my entry. Once I found it the rest came to me in a short time! 🐾🐯
Anonymous
4th Feb 2018 10:53am
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you killed it my beauty though you left me shocked
and all, lol!
you are a poetic prodigy with words and form
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you killed it my beauty though you left me shocked
and all, lol!
you are a poetic prodigy with words and form
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Oh my, sweetheart, I hope I didn't shock you too badly, or in a bad way, I should say! I wasn't sure about publishing the piece at all at first because the way I write - I mean - it's not usually how I express. But the competition - I wanted to try the host's original style and see what would come from my muse who was obviously feeling rather mischievous at the time! ;)
But I thank you for your words of appreciation & support. You are way too kind. And how you honor me!
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But I thank you for your words of appreciation & support. You are way too kind. And how you honor me!
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
7th Feb 2018 9:38am
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7th Feb 2018 2:07pm
Aw thank you so much my dear for embracing my dizzy little ode! I had so much fun doing the write that it was a treat for me, not just a challenge. And oh yes I'm glad you brought that up lol, the naughty "bits"! 🐾🐯
9th Feb 2018 9:57am
Well for sure I had fun writing this, so I thank you for coming by to give it a read & a shout.🗣💓
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