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Crossroads
My pen has fallen silent
It sits in (weight) wait
Of thoughts that can't seem to form
Themselves into anything
That resembles poetry ...
*sigh*
It sits in (weight) wait
Of thoughts that can't seem to form
Themselves into anything
That resembles poetry ...
*sigh*
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Re. Crossroads
Silent pen, silent pen... Is it only a dream, silent pen ?
If so, ... everything will change drastically soon.
The change will become a poem
... ... ... ...
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Would like reading the following poem?
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/294502-required/
I wrote it on 22nd December 2017:
*REQUIRED*
Chilling verses out of nowhere
Out of everywhere
And into here
Seeking company
Shutting out the sun
Required
Empty
Silent
Grimy
This perfectly unexpected commonplaceness
Oh, dude...
Feel the solitude of this deep dark happiness
Bringing oneself out of oneself...
Making oneself available
Life is always understandable
... ... ... ...
If so, ... everything will change drastically soon.
The change will become a poem
... ... ... ...
_________________________________________________________________
Would like reading the following poem?
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/294502-required/
I wrote it on 22nd December 2017:
*REQUIRED*
Chilling verses out of nowhere
Out of everywhere
And into here
Seeking company
Shutting out the sun
Required
Empty
Silent
Grimy
This perfectly unexpected commonplaceness
Oh, dude...
Feel the solitude of this deep dark happiness
Bringing oneself out of oneself...
Making oneself available
Life is always understandable
... ... ... ...
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Re: Re. Crossroads
4th Sep 2020 2:48am
Thank you so much Marks for the thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated!
I apologize for the long delay in my response.
I apologize for the long delay in my response.
Re. Crossroads
30th Jan 2018 6:59pm
beautiful Jemac
a very poignant write
your pen will never stay still for long
I believe your muse may be talking
perhaps just not saying what you desire..
keep writing your's is a most beautiful voice..
love Crim
a very poignant write
your pen will never stay still for long
I believe your muse may be talking
perhaps just not saying what you desire..
keep writing your's is a most beautiful voice..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Crossroads
4th Sep 2020 2:49am
Thank you so much Crim for your beautiful comments .. greatly appreciated x
I apologize for my very long over do response.
I apologize for my very long over do response.
Re. Crossroads
30th Jan 2018 11:02pm
Quality matters and not quantity.
And in the poetry of yours that I have read, quality dominates.
And in the poetry of yours that I have read, quality dominates.
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Re: Re. Crossroads
4th Sep 2020 2:51am
Thank you so much Takis for your thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated
I apologize for my delayed response
I apologize for my delayed response
Re. Crossroads
31st Jan 2018 8:43am
Re: Re. Crossroads
4th Sep 2020 2:52am
Thank you so much SweetOblivion for your thoughtful comments.. always appreciated
I apologize for my very late response
I apologize for my very late response
Re. Crossroads
Anonymous
31st Jan 2018 3:26pm
And the poem belies its words. I've been here. You've expressed it beautifully.
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. Crossroads
4th Sep 2020 2:53am
Thank you so much Willow for your beautiful comments .. always appreciated x
I apologize for my very late response
I apologize for my very late response
Re. Crossroads
Anonymous
31st Jan 2018 11:04pm
And yet this is poetry...with a light fragrance of Plath and Sexton,
love you my lady!!!
love you my lady!!!
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Re: Re. Crossroads
4th Sep 2020 2:54am
Thank you so much SplitSunsets for such lovely comments ... most appreciated x
I apologize for my late response
I apologize for my late response
Re. Crossroads
1st Feb 2018 10:19pm
I dig it, and cannot count the times I've been in that situation. You want to snap the pen in half, over the frustration. But eventually, the words start flowing, again. Well done!
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Re: Re. Crossroads
4th Sep 2020 2:56am
Thank you so much Wolftrax for your thoughtful comments .. very much appreciated
I apologize for my late response
I apologize for my late response