Forge Me

I think it is great, your choice of metaphor is outstanding. We all want that strength to surround allowing us to become better.

Thank you Tim. I have been experiencing some challenges these days. This write is right about all my feelings and wishes. Hope I am stronger now.

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RoseJasmine

Powerful prayer for transformation...like the dreams of a chrysalis waiting to emerge and spread wings...very stimulating read Jasmine...

Your comment is very encouraging to my soul. I am honored. Thank you Lawrence for the always support.  

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RoseJasmine

It takes a dedicated and trusting soul to allow themselves to be molded by another individual.

It's true. All of us more or less need to be molded by an individual or God. I think it's a good chance for me to grow each time even though the process was so tough...thank you McEltic for the nice feedback.

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RoseJasmine

Hey Rose......whew this one I read several times over........brilliant ink.....enjoyed much....rl for me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)

Hey beautiful flowergirl, glad I can read your nice comment to start my day. This write presents my feelings that I have gone through for the past few weeks.  Love your feedback and the strong support.

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RoseJasmine

RoseJasmine.. brilliant ink.. really dig this.. into my list it goes.. much respect..
























Dave

Thank you Dave, Glad you like it. It's my honor to get your RL add. Much appreciated!

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RoseJasmine

"Just let me transform in your forge
Give me wrought iron bones  
Burn my weak soul into boldness
So that I can conquer the storms "

now my new favorite...
you continue to write the wonderful flow of your heart...
always a sweet journey with lovely perception..

love
Jeff

Always always enjoy reading your comment dear Jeff. Glad you had a sweet journey with me.....

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RoseJasmine

what can I say
you are poet on the runway
poetry is coming your way
post many more each day
then see how many you need to polish
and how many  are already

Thank you Again for the suggestion. I will write more for sure...appreciate your read and comment.

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RoseJasmine

wow!!!...this is profoundly beautiful...

Dear Naajir, nice to have your visit. Adversities always make people think profoundly. Glad I have had some of them recently. Thank you for the nice comment.

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RoseJasmine

Rose, this is fantastic! I love the idea of being molded any which way in a forge. Our life's circumstances can be that forge, Bravisima!

Ah Gahddess, glad you love the idea but it's not just an idea, instead it's what I believe. If I can't avoid it, I have to accept it. Truly painful sometimes.
Thank you so much for sharing your thought, and your compliment is very encouraging...

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RoseJasmine

Sending Scottish warrior vibes to stand beside you :-)))

such a beautiful request poem - loved it :-)))))))

Oh dear David, you are super supportive. I would love your Scottish warrior vibes to protect me...I need fighting sometimes lol...thank you for making me smile :))))))

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RoseJasmine

This is a very touching poem, makes me want to hug you, to show vulnerability is to show strength and beauty! :)

Thank you ArthurVaso for the read, the encouraging feedback, and the comforting thought. Glad to know you here and share poems with each other. Truly appreciate your visit!

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RoseJasmine

Thank you for stopping by and read my poem ghost. Interesting to know you have a soul of the east. I guess it would make your life richer in a good way. Anyway, nice to meet you here, and appreciate to have your feedback.

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RoseJasmine

Not much I can add to what’s already been said.
Beautiful as always RJ <3

Dear sophie, you have already given the best comment. I know you know how I have felt...thank you so much <3

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RoseJasmine

More than I care to admit at times. Keep shining beautiful <3

I have felt so much of your love. What you gave is more than words <3

Thank you Danny. Nice to see you again!

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RoseJasmine

Just profound  
'I don’t have to be me  
Whatever you want me to be  
Eradicate the edges of my body  
You can even change my identity '

i have felt this way before, handing myself over...


"Just let me transform in your forge  
Give me wrought iron bones    
Burn my weak soul into boldness  
So that I can conquer the storms "

wow this imagery is fascinated,  truly amazing how you place the  words together to convey an action of an emotion.


"Being wrought and forged  
Solace my soul, the silent road  
Comfort my body, the shrunken flesh  
They form genuine silhouette of me "

LOVE LOVE LOVE this line. there is so much strength here. totally genuis and genuine.  


"So, being my alchemist  
Hold on to my desire  
Forge me in your furnace fire  
Right within your style"

i love how you ended it.  this is such a fantastic write. . thank you for sharing it and writing it , poetess  

so much respect for your writing , so much love, marielle

Wow, this is a special comment. I am so impressed by your words. Thank you for the detailed feedback. That made me feel I am so honored :)))

Appreciate the RL add too <3

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RoseJasmine

hi rose... i love how you mention being tiny like sand..it speaks to me of a vulnerability, but a willing desire to be created into something greater, .  you are tiny like a speck of sand and you allow transformation to occur. who wants to be like a speck of sand ? i doubt i would be..
safely being molded and changed, an outside force/ event causes you to transform into something greater.

i love these lines rose..

Just let me transform in your forge
Give me wrought iron bones  
Burn my weak soul into boldness
So that I can conquer the storms

wow, such powerful and strongly worded lines! this speaks to me of someone who aches to be strong, perhaps they feel too weak and somehow made to sink by events in life.
everyone needs to feel they can overcome a storm, nobody wants to feel under its control

i truly love your poems