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if you ever
if you ever
find me tight lipped
bring her over
and you won't be
stopping me grin
if you ever
find my eyes dry
take her away
and you won't be
stopping me cry
if you ever
wanna make me smile
the smile from heart
make her say a word
and you won't be
stopping my joy
if you ever
wanna kill me
just tell me
she'd leave me
and you won't be
stopping me die
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Published 27th Jan 2018
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27th Jan 2018 2:37pm
They do, these most wondrous
creatures, have the ability
to affect and effect
our very being.
The peer poet's
word selection,
talent of expression,
leaves an impression.
creatures, have the ability
to affect and effect
our very being.
The peer poet's
word selection,
talent of expression,
leaves an impression.
3rd Feb 2018 6:17am
welcome
is the Friend,
the Poet
The wise Human!
yes,
indeed they do!!
well
some expressions
write themselves!
appreciate immensely
the visit
the review
the insight!!
is the Friend,
the Poet
The wise Human!
yes,
indeed they do!!
well
some expressions
write themselves!
appreciate immensely
the visit
the review
the insight!!
Anonymous
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28th Jan 2018 7:35am
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3rd Feb 2018 6:21am
Ahh!!
welcome
is the Artist beautiful!!
yes, kinda scary, but the greater the love
the greater the fear of losing it!
honoring and humbling at the same time
is the visit and the review
of the Friend!
welcome
is the Artist beautiful!!
yes, kinda scary, but the greater the love
the greater the fear of losing it!
honoring and humbling at the same time
is the visit and the review
of the Friend!
18th Mar 2018 12:26pm
Amazing heart joys, nothing remotely compares does it. I loved the gentle softness lurking round the corners of your word choice & placement. You have such simplicity yet always resonating with profoundness, I call it a raw grittiness of gifted talent, well penned my friend, well penned. Much Respect,
me
me
23rd Mar 2018 1:57pm
welcome
dear Friend! dear poet!
touched. by the kindness, the generosity.
humbled and honored at the same time.
This befits the souls that hold their hold on our hearts. At the moment.. this for my nearly 2 year old daughter!! My life! my joy! her innocence and mischiefs just overwhelm me!
dear Friend! dear poet!
touched. by the kindness, the generosity.
humbled and honored at the same time.
This befits the souls that hold their hold on our hearts. At the moment.. this for my nearly 2 year old daughter!! My life! my joy! her innocence and mischiefs just overwhelm me!
