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The City Moonlight
Sprinkling and splashing
the silver moonbeams
strews over the gurgling streams
and pours into the drifter’s dreams
Through the sash window
it shines upon his pillow
woke him up to sing a solo
at a distance, it echoed
hummed with a weeping willow
He walked closer
stares into the hollow
meets the moonshine below
His lonely heart has a special halo
where carries memories
and his midnight prayers
Under the moonlight
He is writing his self-poetry
with a pen of the fairy’s mystery
which gives birth to hopes
again, it echoes
through the winter hallway
up to the spring Milky Way
The moon knows
how much I remember him
When the moon projects
I embrace his dreams
They are beautifully woven
and never fall apart at the seams
The moon realizes
how much I wish him well
I ask for its darting radiance
break through time and space
to light up his dream
and watch over him
In the two cities
at different directions
The separated hearts meet
soaking in its bright glories
No matter where and when
the city moonlight always shines forth
at the same place, never miss
for the two of us
the silver moonbeams
strews over the gurgling streams
and pours into the drifter’s dreams
Through the sash window
it shines upon his pillow
woke him up to sing a solo
at a distance, it echoed
hummed with a weeping willow
He walked closer
stares into the hollow
meets the moonshine below
His lonely heart has a special halo
where carries memories
and his midnight prayers
Under the moonlight
He is writing his self-poetry
with a pen of the fairy’s mystery
which gives birth to hopes
again, it echoes
through the winter hallway
up to the spring Milky Way
The moon knows
how much I remember him
When the moon projects
I embrace his dreams
They are beautifully woven
and never fall apart at the seams
The moon realizes
how much I wish him well
I ask for its darting radiance
break through time and space
to light up his dream
and watch over him
In the two cities
at different directions
The separated hearts meet
soaking in its bright glories
No matter where and when
the city moonlight always shines forth
at the same place, never miss
for the two of us
Written by
RoseJasmine
Published 18th Jan 2018
| Edited 27th Jan 2018
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Re. The City Moonlight
18th Jan 2018 3:40am
almost classica feeling romantic tale...touched by your own heart...enjoyed reading Jasmine
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
18th Jan 2018 3:44am
Thank you Lawrence. I want it beautifully lonely, quiet, missing...all of it from my heart....glad you feel it.
much much love
RoseJasmine
much much love
RoseJasmine
Re. The City Moonlight
18th Jan 2018 5:13am
so utterly beautiful sweet poetess...this is a masterpiece of your heart...I love it...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
18th Jan 2018 10:22am
So glad you love it dear Jeff...the midnight wishes could be utterly beautiful...
much much love
RoseJamine
much much love
RoseJamine
Re. The City Moonlight
18th Jan 2018 5:46am
Re: Re. The City Moonlight
Thank you my dear H. Always always appreciate your nice feedback.
<3<3
much much love
RoseJasmine
<3<3
much much love
RoseJasmine
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
18th Jan 2018 12:15pm
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
18th Jan 2018 3:41pm
Thank you John for the great comment. Your words and the point of view gave me a new aspect to my poem. Appreciate you took a closer look at my work. Your thoughts are precious to me.
much much love
RoseJasmine
much much love
RoseJasmine
Re. The City Moonlight
Anonymous
18th Jan 2018 2:40pm
Beautiful write Rose! Thoroughly enjoyed it!
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
Hey Starlite, so glad to have your read and comment. Thank you for the RL addition. I really enjoy your visit.
much much love
RoseJasmine
much much love
RoseJasmine
Re. The City Moonlight
Anonymous
19th Jan 2018 00:02am
So beautiful RJ. Lost myself in the tranquility it brought. Closing lines are just perfection.
Well done lovely one <3
Well done lovely one <3
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
19th Jan 2018 2:42am
My dear sophie, I am overwhelmed by the sentiments of your love and support. So so glad you love it and added it to your RL...I am so honored ....
I love your works too <3<3
much much love
RoseJasmine
I love your works too <3<3
much much love
RoseJasmine
Re. The City Moonlight
20th Jan 2018 1:03am
reads like an old black and white movies - it is so beautiful :-)))))
Hugs :-))))
Hugs :-))))
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
20th Jan 2018 1:27am
I love your feedback...an old black and white movie...interesting....
Thank you dear David for the always support. Love love love you!
RoseJasmine
Thank you dear David for the always support. Love love love you!
RoseJasmine
Re. The City Moonlight
Anonymous
20th Jan 2018 2:58am
Awe Rose........I’m actually speechless to have read such a beautiful visual of words.......your ink has created a very sensual moonlit night......enjoyed very much......luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
20th Jan 2018 7:22am
Thank you flowergirl for spending time reading and commenting...your presence is a gift to me...appreciate what you have done for me...
much much love
RoseJasmine
much much love
RoseJasmine
Anonymous
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20th Jan 2018 7:30am
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
20th Jan 2018 7:39am
Oh my dear Silence, you always honor me...or just we have very close thoughts. I am overwhelmed by your comment. Thank you so so much for the nice feedback. Your words mean a lot to me.
much much love
RoseJasmine
much much love
RoseJasmine
Re. The City Moonlight
20th Jan 2018 4:26pm
this is dark and magical, speaking from the depths of your heart , and describing the darkness of the moon, and a loves longing, a creepiness that evokes beauty.
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Re. The City Moonlight
20th Jan 2018 4:27pm
i love how you brought the mystical world into this write, you write so well
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
21st Jan 2018 2:15am
Thank you my dear marielle, I want you to know how much your commnent touches my heart--throught you, I see my work in a different angle, and fall in love with my words again. your points of view from a world which is cryptic and amazingly beautiful....
much much love
RoseJasmine
much much love
RoseJasmine
Re. The City Moonlight
22nd Jan 2018 7:20pm
Re: Re. The City Moonlight
23rd Jan 2018 3:14am
Hey Tim, thank you for the nice feedback. Glad you like this. I am happy that my write could help you daydream a bit....your visit means a lot to me :)
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. The City Moonlight
23rd Jan 2018 3:12am
Re: Re. The City Moonlight
Hey Tenderloin, nice to see you here. So impressed by your comment, and glad you could feel the subtle sentiments I have conveyed. Thank you so so much. Love your words for this write...
And thank you for the RL addition.
much love
RoseJasmine
And thank you for the RL addition.
much love
RoseJasmine
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
7th Feb 2018 3:02pm
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
7th Feb 2018 3:27pm
Re. The City Moonlight
25th Feb 2018 5:10pm
I felt the first 4 stanzas weren't needed. I like your personificiation of the moon.
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
25th Feb 2018 5:17pm
Thank you for reading and sharing your thought. I will double check the part. Really appreciate your visit.
love
RoseJasmine
love
RoseJasmine
Re. The City Moonlight
27th Mar 2018 10:39pm
this felt quite lengthy. i like the personal atmosphere in the last four stanzas.
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Re: Re. The City Moonlight
28th Mar 2018 3:13am
Thank you Sir for stopping by and sharing your thought. Glad you like them. Tha city moonlight is part of my life and I will write about it more soon.
love
RoseJasmine
love
RoseJasmine