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Tides
I am but water
In my most human state
Waiting to be moved
By the moon
By you
By anything capable
Of changing my shape
...
And
In this precious time
That is the brief moment
Of a life
I have been blessed
By knowing
Such tides
As these
In my most human state
Waiting to be moved
By the moon
By you
By anything capable
Of changing my shape
...
And
In this precious time
That is the brief moment
Of a life
I have been blessed
By knowing
Such tides
As these
Written by
prestonGibson
(NomadsPath)
Published 10th Jan 2018
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Re. Tides
Anonymous
10th Jan 2018 2:03pm
The imagery you've used to convey emotional movement are perfect. This is a wholly beautiful poem that soothes the soul and warms the heart. Lovely
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. Tides
12th Jan 2018 2:36pm
Re. Tides
10th Jan 2018 10:45pm
Water waiting to be moved, I imagine open mindedness from this poem.
Great read
Great read
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Re: Re. Tides
12th Jan 2018 2:37pm
I love that this painted the idea of something for you to imagine! Thank you for your feedback and time out to read!
-All Love
-All Love
Re. Tides
10th Jan 2018 11:51pm
Re: Re. Tides
12th Jan 2018 2:38pm
Where I strive for simplicity I am taken by your comment. Thank you for your feedback!
-All Love
-All Love
Re. Tides
It was on my third consecutive pass as I read your piece that I felt the connection I somehow knew was there come into my mind in its slow motion ripples. And it was then my eyelids closed to see it clearly.
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Re: Re. Tides
8th Feb 2018 5:34pm
What beautiful feedback. I am honored. I rarely comeback to a poem, but this one has a special place. Thank you for your feedback and for bringing me back to this! ❤️
-ALL LOVE
-ALL LOVE
Re. Tides
9th Feb 2018 2:04am
Wow, this is breathtaking! Absolutely loved every letter, such fluidity =) You have a strong sense of flow!
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Re: Re. Tides
10th Feb 2018 5:40pm
What a compliment!
Thank you so much for taking time out to relay such wonderful feedback. I look forward to returning the favor.
-ALL LOVE
Thank you so much for taking time out to relay such wonderful feedback. I look forward to returning the favor.
-ALL LOVE
Re. Tides
24th Apr 2018 1:17pm
I've come too late to say anything original. So I add your wonderful piece to my list, where I will admire it there.
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