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Waning Gibbous
Sable mantle dons
her saffron shoulders
Studded formations
shape vantablack velvet
as constellations
Portals of REM
bend earthen reality
unfolding possibility
Light illuminates paths
but, darkness reveals Truth
strength of heart
Waning gibbous tests belief
compels Us onward
in blind faith
preparing our just reward;
the waxing gift of sight
to see how far we've come
~
For J, my Sun, Moon, Stars
& Love
🌞🌖⭐💜
her saffron shoulders
Studded formations
shape vantablack velvet
as constellations
Portals of REM
bend earthen reality
unfolding possibility
Light illuminates paths
but, darkness reveals Truth
strength of heart
Waning gibbous tests belief
compels Us onward
in blind faith
preparing our just reward;
the waxing gift of sight
to see how far we've come
~
For J, my Sun, Moon, Stars
& Love
🌞🌖⭐💜
Published 7th Jan 2018
| Edited 10th Jan 2018
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2018 5:08pm
Simultaneously sensual and spiritual. A journey into the night with hands held tight; separation not an option.
Along with an amazing new word to add to the vocabulary!
I Love it.
And You. 💜
Along with an amazing new word to add to the vocabulary!
I Love it.
And You. 💜
7th Jan 2018 6:24pm
beautiful Vati
I can feel the mystical quality
of the love you have for your J..
this speaks to my heart..
"Light illuminates paths
but, darkness reveals Truth
strength of heart"
your love has been tried
& found true in the darkness..
so beautiful..
love Raven
I can feel the mystical quality
of the love you have for your J..
this speaks to my heart..
"Light illuminates paths
but, darkness reveals Truth
strength of heart"
your love has been tried
& found true in the darkness..
so beautiful..
love Raven
7th Jan 2018 11:32pm
7th Jan 2018 7:57pm
Beautifully intangible words <3 Fitting, as love is intangible, although our expressions might not be in themselves.
"Studded formations
shape vantablack velvet
as constellations " I love how this reads, it must flows!
Well done :)
"Studded formations
shape vantablack velvet
as constellations " I love how this reads, it must flows!
Well done :)
7th Jan 2018 11:34pm
Anonymous
8th Jan 2018 3:47am
my heart is felt transforming from flurries to butterfly lettering flutters.
so daringly beautiful
so daringly beautiful
9th Jan 2018 1:46pm
Anonymous
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8th Jan 2018 7:42am
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9th Jan 2018 1:48pm
Thank you, Avalon!
Its always interesting to see what section affects different readers. I'm happy you enjoyed this. And more so that you're back. ❤
Its always interesting to see what section affects different readers. I'm happy you enjoyed this. And more so that you're back. ❤
8th Jan 2018 8:07am
oh my stars & garters, vati
this absolutely gorgeous,
the imagery is pure magic
xo
this absolutely gorgeous,
the imagery is pure magic
xo
9th Jan 2018 1:49pm
8th Jan 2018 9:11am
Well I could say what everyone else said
about this, but you know me I gotta do it my way...lol...soooooo ...this was TrulyFantabulisticallyBeeUteeFull!!! :)
Lol
about this, but you know me I gotta do it my way...lol...soooooo ...this was TrulyFantabulisticallyBeeUteeFull!!! :)
Lol
9th Jan 2018 1:45pm
PoetikOne, I would prefer nothing but yourself! Thank you always for your time and words! ❤
Anonymous
8th Jan 2018 6:49pm
waxing, excellent word choice - fits in perfectly with your poems theme
9th Jan 2018 1:44pm
8th Jan 2018 10:13pm
This us truly beautiful - I feel this so much :-)))))
I glanced at the title and I thought it said "Warning Gibbons" might use that as a title - i will give you the credit :-)))))
I glanced at the title and I thought it said "Warning Gibbons" might use that as a title - i will give you the credit :-)))))
9th Jan 2018 1:44pm
Anonymous
9th Jan 2018 8:12am
Views of your love story, has the potential of changing perceptions of full, unconditional love.
Lovely piece.
Beth
Lovely piece.
Beth
9th Jan 2018 1:43pm
11th Jan 2018 1:47am
"the waxing gift of sight" that's lovely. Speaks to me of wisdom and the lessons we teach each other.
11th Jan 2018 1:48pm
