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Houses Of The Holy
Apricot heat of
the sun
unseen
beats on little
washed-out buttcheeks
What palisades pull
upon your rawboned
knees?
Will your twiggy
limbs lunge through
The Crunge
& faintedly find reprieve?
Or,
will there be
No Quarter
for sallow souls as these?
Dancing through Days
(No, I know you "ain't disclosing no names"!)
on the anti-rain
plane
Naked love
Over Hills they came
& naked in pain
down & dusty...
away again
***
For the album cover comp. Led Zeppelin' s Houses Of The Holy album cover has always delightfully confused me, ever since I remember seeing it as a wee thing. There are bits and additions for fans couched in here :)
Published 3rd Jan 2018
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3rd Jan 2018 12:56pm
I Love that it starts us off with a taste in the first stanza.
"Or,
will there be
No Quarter
for sallow souls as these? "- no quarter, holy shit the thoughts that rush with that line is epic.
when the victor shows no clemency or mercy and refuses to spare the life of a vanquished opponent in return for their surrender at discretion.
These Laws and Customs of War on Land
awesome thoughts pushing from an album cover AtoMik.
"Or,
will there be
No Quarter
for sallow souls as these? "- no quarter, holy shit the thoughts that rush with that line is epic.
when the victor shows no clemency or mercy and refuses to spare the life of a vanquished opponent in return for their surrender at discretion.
These Laws and Customs of War on Land
awesome thoughts pushing from an album cover AtoMik.
3rd Jan 2018 1:40pm
5th Jan 2018 1:01am
beautiful Atomik
the opening of this brilliant write is gorgeous
it gave me a giggle picturing those precious little cheeks..
stellar ink..
love Crim
the opening of this brilliant write is gorgeous
it gave me a giggle picturing those precious little cheeks..
stellar ink..
love Crim
5th Jan 2018 8:30pm
Thank you all so very much, I'm sorry I haven't been around much. I appreciate the love, this was a super fun write :)
9th Jan 2018 2:42am
Apricot heat of
the sun
unseen
beats on little
washed-out buttcheeks - wow just wow :-)))))) I love your poetry :-)))
the sun
unseen
beats on little
washed-out buttcheeks - wow just wow :-)))))) I love your poetry :-)))
9th Jan 2018 7:33am
