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Crying Tears
Authors Note: This is always a difficult time of the year and as we stop to celebrate the New Year I would ask you to spare a thought for all those who will not make far into the New Year as the suicide rate starts to climb. Love each other and be kind to each other and if you can remember to contact those you know to be sad and lonely
Happy New Year
CRYING TEARS
The tears of a jilted lover
A lover who jilts’ tears of guilt
The grief of losing
The loss of suffered grief
Crying with laughter
Crying: The joke, no longer funny
The pain of crying
The cries of those in pain
Crying when you fail
Failing to even cry
Crying from frustration
The frustration of not to crying
Crying when hurt
Hurting too much to cry
The cries of the lost
The loss of needed tears
Tears of remembrance
Remembering tears shed
The crying of a child
The child that makes us cry
The tears of those facing death
The death of those killed for crying
The tears of the fearful
Those too scared to crying
The tears that caused you to load the gun
Loading the gun before the tears flow
The realisation of being loved
The realisation of truly loving
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Hang on in there - David
Happy New Year
CRYING TEARS
The tears of a jilted lover
A lover who jilts’ tears of guilt
The grief of losing
The loss of suffered grief
Crying with laughter
Crying: The joke, no longer funny
The pain of crying
The cries of those in pain
Crying when you fail
Failing to even cry
Crying from frustration
The frustration of not to crying
Crying when hurt
Hurting too much to cry
The cries of the lost
The loss of needed tears
Tears of remembrance
Remembering tears shed
The crying of a child
The child that makes us cry
The tears of those facing death
The death of those killed for crying
The tears of the fearful
Those too scared to crying
The tears that caused you to load the gun
Loading the gun before the tears flow
The realisation of being loved
The realisation of truly loving
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Hang on in there - David
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2017 5:58pm
Such a beautiful and important message. Happy New Year, David. Be blessed.
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1st Jan 2018 1:21am
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31st Dec 2017 6:06pm
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1st Jan 2018 1:22am
Happy New Year Teri to you and yours - thank you for your support and friendship :-)))))
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2017 6:10pm
Lovely & thoughtful sentiment.
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1st Jan 2018 1:23am
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Very compassionate, my friend. The world needs more of it.
May your New Year be blessed with much Love and Happiness, David. 🎊❤
May your New Year be blessed with much Love and Happiness, David. 🎊❤
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1st Jan 2018 1:25am
Thank you so much Ahavati for your comment and your continued support and assistance to become a better poet :-))))
Best wishes and hopes for your 2018 :-)))))))
Best wishes and hopes for your 2018 :-)))))))
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2017 7:07pm
Such an important message, my friend. Your heart and your compassion serve you well. So many hugs headed your...pass them on as you wish. There are plenty more where they come from. A happy loving new year wish for you, David!
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1st Jan 2018 1:26am
Thank you ash so so much your friendship and support mean the world to me :-)))))))
Huge massive Hugs :-)))
Huge massive Hugs :-)))
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31st Dec 2017 9:05pm
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12th Jan 2018 5:15am
awwweeee thank you so much, that was such a sweet thing to say :-)))
Hugs :-)))
Hugs :-)))
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31st Dec 2017 9:07pm
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12th Jan 2018 5:16am
thank you my friend - it seemed apt when writing it :-((
Big Scottish Bear Hug :-)))
Big Scottish Bear Hug :-)))
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1st Jan 2018 2:35am
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12th Jan 2018 5:17am
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1st Jan 2018 11:42am
New Year's has never been easy for me. I spend nearly everyone alone watching that ball drop. Tonight was no different. Laid in bed and watched it again, the rolled over and fell asleep while people cheered 150 miles away. At least tonight I was spared the usual tears that flow from my loneliness. Perhaps I was just to tired to care...
Excellent expression as always David!!!
JJ
Excellent expression as always David!!!
JJ
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12th Jan 2018 5:19am
I feel you my friend this time of year has been fraught for years :-((
thank you for your unwavering support and inspiration :-)))
thank you for your unwavering support and inspiration :-)))
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I feel a special empathy with this heartache of a poem. Tears cried, tears unable to be cried, years of tears stuffed inside or overflown only when alone. I long to be by your side for all things felt, tears of joy and tears of grief - I know you will take such good care of my heart and I will take good care of yours too hunny <3
The realization of True Love will manifest our Dream; we shall know of such warmth and sincerity, soon <3
I love you David =)
The realization of True Love will manifest our Dream; we shall know of such warmth and sincerity, soon <3
I love you David =)
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18th Jan 2018 4:16am
Such a beautiful response :-x We will both be free to be who we are and we will complete each other :-)))))
Audrey: I love you little one :-)))))
Audrey: I love you little one :-)))))