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I Thought About What You Said
If I am really
The bad guy,
Then you are
A fucking psychopath.
The bad guy,
Then you are
A fucking psychopath.
Written by
Ghost223
(The Midnight Poet)
Published 30th Dec 2017
| Edited 31st Dec 2017
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Re. I Thought About What You Said
30th Dec 2017 7:20pm
I feel powerful pain
from this deeply fierce write..
exceptional..
~Raven
from this deeply fierce write..
exceptional..
~Raven
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Re. I Thought About What You Said
30th Dec 2017 7:57pm
where was this line during my last breakup?
there is so much emotion packed into so few lines,
your rage is palpable, seething from the page
{so to speak}
ps. l3 you have an errant "n"
this is micro poetry at its finest.
thanks for a great read
there is so much emotion packed into so few lines,
your rage is palpable, seething from the page
{so to speak}
ps. l3 you have an errant "n"
this is micro poetry at its finest.
thanks for a great read
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31st Dec 2017 1:52am
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Re: Re. I Thought About What You Said
31st Dec 2017 9:38am
LTM - laughing to myself. see PoetSpeak's poem of the same title for details :)
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Re. I Thought About What You Said
31st Dec 2017 1:38am
powerfully freaking fierce write
dearest Tryston
packed with fierce emotion..
excellent..
love Brenda
dearest Tryston
packed with fierce emotion..
excellent..
love Brenda
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31st Dec 2017 1:53am