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Redemption
Strapped to my altar
waiting for me to ravage
her moral center
The universe starts to resist ...
Teeth sink into original sin
spilling the wine of her communion
while the walls bleed her pain
Immoral virgin splayed open
black and blue ... her penance
for swallowing my fury
Unleashed cobra ... eastern king
slithers inside, stretching
her resolve
Venom oozing
he strikes ...
claiming his prey
Her conception ... no longer
immaculate
Published 29th Dec 2017
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 11:44am
Fantastic write!
29th Dec 2017 12:04pm
Dear StarlightStarfright
I thank you for your comment ... I appreciate your visit
~Wicked
I thank you for your comment ... I appreciate your visit
~Wicked
29th Dec 2017 1:44pm
promised myself i would stop making a habit of reading erotica at work...
fuckit
... in my defense, i've held out for hours but curiosity & koshkas ltm
*
dark gods, this is glorious.
your metaphors were breathtaking
& now, i'm going to smoke.
a great write.
fuckit
... in my defense, i've held out for hours but curiosity & koshkas ltm
*
dark gods, this is glorious.
your metaphors were breathtaking
& now, i'm going to smoke.
a great write.
29th Dec 2017 2:04pm
Dear talented one,
I can't tell you how much your comments and visits mean to me ... on many levels;
The fact that someone with immeasurable talent as yours would enjoy my ink is thrilling ... then there is the common denominator we share for the edgy side of s&m, which in and of itself is like being home,
With greatest appreciation for your visits
~Wicked
I can't tell you how much your comments and visits mean to me ... on many levels;
The fact that someone with immeasurable talent as yours would enjoy my ink is thrilling ... then there is the common denominator we share for the edgy side of s&m, which in and of itself is like being home,
With greatest appreciation for your visits
~Wicked
29th Dec 2017 3:51pm
29th Dec 2017 3:56pm
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29th Dec 2017 9:42pm
Thank you Rain!
I appreciate your visit immensely ... I am a big fan of yours, as well :)
~Wicked
I appreciate your visit immensely ... I am a big fan of yours, as well :)
~Wicked
31st Dec 2017 9:00pm
A most deadly redemption indeed, offering her pound of flesh to return to His sadistic, good graces. Truly enjoyed the raw, visceral imagery, the suggestions of deadly wrath at disposal, barely withheld within a single hand's control. That makes this so much more powerful.
Many thanks !
As always . I have enjoy your iinsight, and your poetic words of praise.
Always
Wicked
As always . I have enjoy your iinsight, and your poetic words of praise.
Always
Wicked
28th Oct 2022 6:35am
My Sir,
You always did so enjoy my twisted erotic religion tales. I believe you were caught in my web of communion and penance perversions. (Smiles, remembering).
And we both knew what you were really thinking at that funeral mass that inspired this piece, as I knelt in my black skirt with no panties, at your direction, leering with barely concealed lust at the profane nature of our inner "communion", while maintaining outward piety.
I so loved being your muse...
~k
You always did so enjoy my twisted erotic religion tales. I believe you were caught in my web of communion and penance perversions. (Smiles, remembering).
And we both knew what you were really thinking at that funeral mass that inspired this piece, as I knelt in my black skirt with no panties, at your direction, leering with barely concealed lust at the profane nature of our inner "communion", while maintaining outward piety.
I so loved being your muse...
~k
