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my boy a superhero
my boy's a superhero
my boy's a fighter
my life the fading lines
he the highlighter
my boy the superhero
my boy the fighter
the dark days my past
future couldn't be brighter
my princess my joy
my sea of joy's buoy
the epitome of beauty
The innocent the cutie!
sweetness you define
my blues you confine
my little angel my fairy
me life extraordinary
with joy you have me bound
you've tamed a mongrel a hound
you two have erased my rage
made old beyond my age
Author's note: obviously, for my two little superheroes who incinerate my stress at the doorstep every time i enter the home.
Published 27th Dec 2017
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27th Dec 2017 10:02pm
27th Dec 2017 10:05pm
welcome dear Friend!
yes! special indeed they are.
and what would one call demon slayers? superheroes of course!
appreciation, deep
for the visit of a friend
and
for the feedback affectionate.
cheers!
C_F
yes! special indeed they are.
and what would one call demon slayers? superheroes of course!
appreciation, deep
for the visit of a friend
and
for the feedback affectionate.
cheers!
C_F
27th Dec 2017 10:29pm
27th Dec 2017 10:30pm
28th Dec 2017 1:05am
28th Dec 2017 1:07am
28th Dec 2017 2:07am
Beautiful, this feels like it just spilled straight from the heart. Great pen.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
28th Dec 2017 2:23am
indeed
from nowhere else
for they only reside there!
welcome
is the peer admired
welcome
is the friend dear!
from nowhere else
for they only reside there!
welcome
is the peer admired
welcome
is the friend dear!
28th Dec 2017 10:28am
No greater love.... How lucky you all are.
I'm sure if they had the ink they would write just as beautiful even if it were on the walls! :)
I'm sure if they had the ink they would write just as beautiful even if it were on the walls! :)
29th Dec 2017 7:49am
Yes!
welcome again
dear friend!!
yes no greater love.
well..pretty sure they would! and i bet theirs would be much more beautiful!
Thanks so much Mo Chara!
cheers!
welcome again
dear friend!!
yes no greater love.
well..pretty sure they would! and i bet theirs would be much more beautiful!
Thanks so much Mo Chara!
cheers!
30th Dec 2017 6:47am
A truly beautiful piece of ink CF...a loveful write my friend.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
30th Dec 2017 2:03pm
beautiful it no doubt would be, for it is about two beautiful angels, and i wouldn't take anything else for them even if the entire world begs to differ- that was about them and them only.
And as for the poem, well, Harry you are a generous and kind soul!
Humbling me, your visit. your review.
And as for the poem, well, Harry you are a generous and kind soul!
Humbling me, your visit. your review.
1st Jan 2018 11:58pm
Yes, the lil' ones, like temperature sensors
awaiting your arrival. They warm from
the cold world beyond the home door
and cool when life boils the blood.
Blessed are you, I, all, when we stop and bask in their presence.
A well deserved poem in tribute to them.
awaiting your arrival. They warm from
the cold world beyond the home door
and cool when life boils the blood.
Blessed are you, I, all, when we stop and bask in their presence.
A well deserved poem in tribute to them.
6th Jan 2018 10:39am
Indeed they do.
Without fail.
And Yes! bless is I.
And again blessed is I, for Friends like the ones above!
Welcome is the Friend.
welcome is the Peer!
Appreciation.
deep.
Without fail.
And Yes! bless is I.
And again blessed is I, for Friends like the ones above!
Welcome is the Friend.
welcome is the Peer!
Appreciation.
deep.
20th Jan 2018 9:58pm
This is well cool. Totally relate to it. Really expresses how cool it is to have kids :)
27th Jan 2018 6:20am
Welcome
dear Friend!
yes, it is indeed cool to have kids. Growing up, thought fatherhood was overrated, what a tool to think that way. I don't blame those who aren't a parent yet not to share the same! something you get it only when you're there!
appreciation, deep,for the visit, the review!
:-)
dear Friend!
yes, it is indeed cool to have kids. Growing up, thought fatherhood was overrated, what a tool to think that way. I don't blame those who aren't a parent yet not to share the same! something you get it only when you're there!
appreciation, deep,for the visit, the review!
:-)
20th Jan 2018 10:00pm
This is well cool. Totally relate to it. Really expresses how cool it is to have kids :)
'my life the fading lines
he the highlighter'
That's my favorite part. Such a cool image.
'my life the fading lines
he the highlighter'
That's my favorite part. Such a cool image.
27th Jan 2018 6:27am
well, some lines
write themselves
and truth has its own way
of revealing itself,
sometimes its lines like the quoted!
appreciation.
immense!
write themselves
and truth has its own way
of revealing itself,
sometimes its lines like the quoted!
appreciation.
immense!
