Red Chill

This piece reminds me of a murder crime scene in the snow

i can see the flashing blue and red lights from the cop cars
crashing on those stretched lips
ghost bites turning to laughter

well penned RoseJasmine

Wow Samael, your imagination is amazing and it made me smile. It just a simple image that it's so cold that chilly air cracks dry lips. But I like your comment....it's super interesting. Maybe you can write your story with it....

much love RoseJasmine

sometimes i take a poem and run flat out wild with it in my head lol.

I can imagine how wild your imagination is dear Samael. Any time I just can find some crazy ideas in your poems.

chilling...

Thank you Lawrence for the comment. I wanted it very cold, but it turned out very frightening....  
 
much love, RoseJasmine

So simple!
Yet a strong taste of blood in my mouth...

Yum..!
H

Glad you could feel the strong taste dear H. Thank you for the support.

much love RoseJasmine

I had forgotten the power of a good haiku. Thank you, I can feel the blood moving now :)

A haiku can be simple and powerful. I love writing it when the strong feeling comes....thank you for the read and comment.

much love, RoseJasmine

beautifully chilling...the cascade into red flow

love
Jeff

Thank you dear Jeff  for the always support.

much love RoseJasmine

I felt that cold n the blood, though I'm so hot most of the times it trickles warmly down my chin before splashin across my chest... Lol jk...

Awww your imagination made this more vividly chilling....glad my words made you feel that....thank you for the read and commenting.

much love RoseJasmine

Chilling indeed... but very captivating.
Love it <3

Thank you dear Sophie. So so glad you love it. My honor indeed <3

much love RoseJasmine