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Once While Trusted
Whisper into me
Anything, everything
Tell the skies
Every word
The truth
In whole
Bleed my empathy
Bleed me dry
Scream at my skin
Dead and pail
Sigh into sunlight
Slowly fading
Knit me a suit
Build me a coffin
Sleep in my comfort
Stain my image
With half-truths
My name is yours
Fully to use.
Anything, everything
Tell the skies
Every word
The truth
In whole
Bleed my empathy
Bleed me dry
Scream at my skin
Dead and pail
Sigh into sunlight
Slowly fading
Knit me a suit
Build me a coffin
Sleep in my comfort
Stain my image
With half-truths
My name is yours
Fully to use.
Published 26th Dec 2017
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26th Dec 2017 1:19pm
there is a reason
i cannot fully describe, in words
something about your pen
your ink i.e you rcraft
that every piece is delivered
is delivered so well and effectively
the effect is just stunning.
this piece no different.
expression, dark and piercing
hope this is a work of fiction
for the recipient
would me decimated.
i cannot fully describe, in words
something about your pen
your ink i.e you rcraft
that every piece is delivered
is delivered so well and effectively
the effect is just stunning.
this piece no different.
expression, dark and piercing
hope this is a work of fiction
for the recipient
would me decimated.
26th Dec 2017 1:41pm
Hardly fiction, more of a truth stretched to the limit of description. Thanks for those words, cold, I appreciate the support from a peer.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
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26th Dec 2017 2:01pm
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27th Dec 2017 2:00am
It's great to see you stop by again! Thanks for the support, much appreciated.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
27th Dec 2017 6:15am
Trust is hard to give, but when given it can be manipulated or misused. I hope it was not so with you. Good read notwithstanding, anonshadow.
It was mistreated and manipulated, it's all a part of life I suppose. Thank you for reading my work, I appreciate it greatly.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
