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Rhapsody
If you know how much
I want you to die
you will surely cry
and I wouldn’t mind
if you would decry
I am guilty of crime
I await you to approach
keep a close night watch
with my sense radar
on every possible track
ambush for a sudden attack
I am confident
you won’t be ever off the hook
As an alternative option
you had better be blindfolded
against the wall
die as a brave defeated hero
otherwise you could consider
drown yourself in the apple cider
that have prepared for my brother
You can accuse me
of intentional homicide
and provide a cast-iron alibi
to set yourself free with a lie
but the strawberry print
on my pure lovely chest
already self-proves
you could never ever declare
you have never done that
Stop the damn buzzes
and stay away from me
not until it’s too late to regret
once I catch you
you will be dead meat
I will do whatever
pinch off your antennas
gouge your eyes
cut off your limbs
squash your torso
unless it’s made of marble
I could kill you in a flash
with an electric swatter
burn you into dusty ash
or else with a hammer
let you become a dot
on the wall paper
you may be lucky enough
to dodge the bullet
but you won’t live long enough
to become a bully
Finally I am tired of terrorist attack
since the night falls so deep
and my body became so weak
fine, smart mosquito
enjoy your last gasp
until tomorrow, just tomorrow
I will let you know
how I take care of you
only in a fatal blow
I want you to die
you will surely cry
and I wouldn’t mind
if you would decry
I am guilty of crime
I await you to approach
keep a close night watch
with my sense radar
on every possible track
ambush for a sudden attack
I am confident
you won’t be ever off the hook
As an alternative option
you had better be blindfolded
against the wall
die as a brave defeated hero
otherwise you could consider
drown yourself in the apple cider
that have prepared for my brother
You can accuse me
of intentional homicide
and provide a cast-iron alibi
to set yourself free with a lie
but the strawberry print
on my pure lovely chest
already self-proves
you could never ever declare
you have never done that
Stop the damn buzzes
and stay away from me
not until it’s too late to regret
once I catch you
you will be dead meat
I will do whatever
pinch off your antennas
gouge your eyes
cut off your limbs
squash your torso
unless it’s made of marble
I could kill you in a flash
with an electric swatter
burn you into dusty ash
or else with a hammer
let you become a dot
on the wall paper
you may be lucky enough
to dodge the bullet
but you won’t live long enough
to become a bully
Finally I am tired of terrorist attack
since the night falls so deep
and my body became so weak
fine, smart mosquito
enjoy your last gasp
until tomorrow, just tomorrow
I will let you know
how I take care of you
only in a fatal blow
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Re. Rhapsody
9th Dec 2017 5:03pm
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9th Dec 2017 5:22pm
Hope it's fun for you to read. Just the mosquito made me crazy lol......
Thank you for the solid support.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Thank you for the solid support.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re. Rhapsody
9th Dec 2017 6:13pm
You will be (dead xxxx) meat
meat = dead
there is no such thing as live meat
is this poem about the modern day ''evilists''
then good lady
meat = dead
there is no such thing as live meat
is this poem about the modern day ''evilists''
then good lady
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10th Dec 2017 8:33am
I admitted I was being evil at the time facing the mosquito lol....
Dear Again, thank you for the read and comment.
much love RoseJasmine
Dear Again, thank you for the read and comment.
much love RoseJasmine
Re. Rhapsody
Anonymous
9th Dec 2017 6:52pm
I’m reading this and I can See the war unfold between the insect and you !
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10th Dec 2017 8:39am
It was a war which often happens in my night life. Wondering if you have the same problem?
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
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Anonymous
10th Dec 2017 12:07pm
When I am Outside on my porch or in my backyard, I would Need an E.M.P to anihalate all the insects lol
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10th Dec 2017 12:38pm
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Anonymous
10th Dec 2017 7:46pm
Electro magnetic pulse
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Re. Rhapsody
9th Dec 2017 7:12pm
I liked the vivid descriptions and the different ways you wish for this attack to happen..
Nice!
H
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10th Dec 2017 8:45am
They were some insane ideas coming out during the fight. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the nice comment.
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
Anonymous
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10th Dec 2017 00:35am
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Re: Re. Rhapsody
10th Dec 2017 00:50am
I was annoyed and a bit angry with it.....hate mosquitoes, don't you? No worries, I never want to hurt anybody lol...so you are safe.
Thank you for the comment.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Thank you for the comment.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re. Rhapsody
10th Dec 2017 10:35am
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10th Dec 2017 12:10pm
Awww... are you dangerous and wicked too?
Thank you Daibach! Glad you thought it is beautiful even though it is a bit violent. Enoy your visit very much.
Love, RoseJaasmine
Thank you Daibach! Glad you thought it is beautiful even though it is a bit violent. Enoy your visit very much.
Love, RoseJaasmine
Re. Rhapsody
11th Dec 2017 00:11am
nice, strong.
it could have been about a lover, or a mosquito, i felt your confidence here, beautifully written
it could have been about a lover, or a mosquito, i felt your confidence here, beautifully written
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Re. Rhapsody
11th Dec 2017 00:12am
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11th Dec 2017 2:24am
Oh no, not a lover. I won't do that or have never done any of it to my lover, but have just left him behind instantly which is the coolest way to do for me.
Thank you my dear for the read, nice comment and the RL add. Your poems are incredibly cool.....
much love RoseJasmine
Thank you my dear for the read, nice comment and the RL add. Your poems are incredibly cool.....
much love RoseJasmine
Re. Rhapsody
11th Dec 2017 00:29am
love it love it....I completely fell for you darkside on this...a murderous intent that shows how we can be deceived by incomplete knowledge...and in the end see the truth...just the death of a bothersome insect...or is it more....an advanced slick write my dear...I greatly enjoyed this rhyme....you left the curve ball to the end...like a good mystery....Agatha Christie would be proud
love always Jeff
love always Jeff
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11th Dec 2017 1:45pm
Wow, Agatha Christie, one of my favorite writer.....
Dearest Jeff, you are too kind to say those. I am totally overwhelmed by your compliment. Glad you love this write and this means a lot to me because I have been thinking if it is too crazy.....love your comment.....
much love, RoseJasmine
Dearest Jeff, you are too kind to say those. I am totally overwhelmed by your compliment. Glad you love this write and this means a lot to me because I have been thinking if it is too crazy.....love your comment.....
much love, RoseJasmine
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12th Dec 2017 00:26am
too crazy for the DUP???....oh sweetie.. you will never be as hardcore as some of the writers on this site
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Thank you Jeff for the comforting words. I hope I can be crazy sometimes without feeling bad.....
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Anonymous
12th Dec 2017 11:24am
An intense war laced with such mystery…
Really enjoyed the read and hope the mosquito got his dues ;)
Really enjoyed the read and hope the mosquito got his dues ;)
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12th Dec 2017 11:56am
The aftermath of the fight was when I got my "armor" ready, I just couldn't find the mosquito. That's fine, after all I have got some peaceful time in these days. Thank you so much for the read and support dear Sophie.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
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Anonymous
13th Dec 2017 3:26pm
amazingly engaging reading, and the inspiration...a mosquito...lol
fascinating, will definitely read more of your poems
thank you for sharing
Harold
fascinating, will definitely read more of your poems
thank you for sharing
Harold
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13th Dec 2017 3:34pm
Lol glad you know my humor Harold. Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thought. Nice to meet you here. Definitely will read yours too.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. Rhapsody
27th Dec 2017 12:42pm
I can't help but laugh about the mosquito because it's just as annoying as my bros. Insect in his book, Note Story...the book is so damn funny becuz
he pretty much adds every insect known
to it n showcases their lives in hilarious
detail. Lol you had some battle plan my dear, guess that Lil pain best be glad you didn't get him! lol...excellent storytelling!!
he pretty much adds every insect known
to it n showcases their lives in hilarious
detail. Lol you had some battle plan my dear, guess that Lil pain best be glad you didn't get him! lol...excellent storytelling!!
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27th Dec 2017 1:59pm
Glad it made you laugh my dear lol...I think I will be planning more carefully next time...nothing will go wrong....
Thanks for your read and comment my dear.
much love RoseJasmine
Thanks for your read and comment my dear.
much love RoseJasmine