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The All-Encompassing Scent of A Submissive
She is submissive, her love selfless, her loyalty unequivocal, her needs rudimentary;
Love
Control
Guidance
Protection
She is not weak, instead she is strong enough to face her desires without shame or reluctance;
Accept the woman
Discipline the slave
Fuck the whore
Use the toy
Never, strip her of who she is, or take away her sense of self;
Her pride
Her passion
Her courage
Her values
Love her for all that she is, mold her into all she can be, cherish her for the gifts she gives;
Break her
Shape her
Make her crave your pain
Engulf her in forbidden pleasures
.....do all these things, and she will Crown you Her King!
Published 8th Dec 2017
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8th Dec 2017 00:11am
beautiful rules of a responsible
& loving Dominant..
sexy as well..
as read in these lines..
"Accept the woman
Discipline the slave
Fuck the whore
Use the toy"
to be so deeply desired sigh
is a thing of great beauty..
love Crim
& loving Dominant..
sexy as well..
as read in these lines..
"Accept the woman
Discipline the slave
Fuck the whore
Use the toy"
to be so deeply desired sigh
is a thing of great beauty..
love Crim
8th Dec 2017 00:59am
My dear Crim
Your words ..beautiful rules of a responsible & loving Dominant”
Happens to be one of the highest compliments one could give me.
I thank you much for your words
With deep admiration
Wicked
Your words ..beautiful rules of a responsible & loving Dominant”
Happens to be one of the highest compliments one could give me.
I thank you much for your words
With deep admiration
Wicked
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Jun 2018 9:45pm
8th Dec 2017 00:15am
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8th Dec 2017 00:59am
8th Dec 2017 00:21am
Maybe he LORD God said:
"It is not good for the man to be alone...
... I will make a helper suitable for him...
And she will study psychology or psychiatry in order to stop being submissive".
"It is not good for the man to be alone...
... I will make a helper suitable for him...
And she will study psychology or psychiatry in order to stop being submissive".
Anonymous
8th Dec 2017 1:30pm
Not really a world I familiar with, but 2 consenting adults, not sure why some are so judgemental. Sign of the times I'm afraid!
8th Dec 2017 4:32pm
@ Trouble_Loves_Me
Thank you so much for this !
Unfortunately, I will have to agree with your comment about the sign of the times.
With much appreciation
~Wicked
Thank you so much for this !
Unfortunately, I will have to agree with your comment about the sign of the times.
With much appreciation
~Wicked
8th Dec 2017 00:21am
8th Dec 2017 1:01am
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
8th Dec 2017 1:24am
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26th Dec 2017 2:59pm
Thank you for your kind words ... as always, I appreciate your visits :)
Happy Holidays!
Wicked
P.S.
Sorry for the delayed response
Happy Holidays!
Wicked
P.S.
Sorry for the delayed response
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
26th Dec 2017 7:23pm
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8th Dec 2017 1:33pm
8th Dec 2017 4:26pm
Thank you my dear Dragon fly ... I knew you would " get this." Your comments are always appreciated .
~Wicked
~Wicked
8th Dec 2017 4:59pm
Oh I'm liking this very much indeed
Perfectly written
To be Dominant or Submissive one must first learn & understand the ways of love & adoration towards each other
For without L & A you have little else except a good example of lust & selfish greed within a relationship
Perfectly written
To be Dominant or Submissive one must first learn & understand the ways of love & adoration towards each other
For without L & A you have little else except a good example of lust & selfish greed within a relationship
8th Dec 2017 5:13pm
My dear Lookawaynow
Well said ! Thank you for both your comment and your insight.
With much appreciation
~Wicked
Well said ! Thank you for both your comment and your insight.
With much appreciation
~Wicked
Anonymous
10th Dec 2017 3:36am
Wicked One, your opening lines set the stage for this write in all its truths...we submissives are the strongest of women, needing to love selflessly and willing to trust all of ourselves in the hands of another without ever feeling a need to question intent...at times this can be a risky maneuver, it has been and was for me and the price paid was almost too much to bare but I have remained upright...one day I will be gifted in kind...
A beautiful write....
Xoxo Taryn
A beautiful write....
Xoxo Taryn
10th Dec 2017 3:45am
How sorry I am that you were hurt. It appears that you have landed on your feet. Never, lose hope, you have so much to give ... if your poetry is any indication, the Dom that earns your submission will be rewarded tenfold!
Stay strong
~Wicked
Stay strong
~Wicked
Anonymous
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26th Dec 2017 2:44pm
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26th Dec 2017 3:07pm
Avaoln
How very sorry I am that your past relationship caused you pain ... I have been in this life for most of my adult life, and I have seen the pain and loss a submissive experiences when she is/ feels abandoned. Never give up my dear ... I can say with a huge degree of certainty, that your former Dom, hadn't a clue to the responsibility and weight that title carries ... he wasn't worthy of your time, nor your submission. I am sure in time, you will find a Dom who appreciates the gifts you have to offer.
~ Wicked
How very sorry I am that your past relationship caused you pain ... I have been in this life for most of my adult life, and I have seen the pain and loss a submissive experiences when she is/ feels abandoned. Never give up my dear ... I can say with a huge degree of certainty, that your former Dom, hadn't a clue to the responsibility and weight that title carries ... he wasn't worthy of your time, nor your submission. I am sure in time, you will find a Dom who appreciates the gifts you have to offer.
~ Wicked
Anonymous
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28th Dec 2017 8:37am
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28th Dec 2017 10:47am
I’m am glad you were able to come out of the ashes with some insight ... at least not all was lost
~ Wicked
~ Wicked
Master,
I remember when we began writing together ... this was our first collaboration. How lovely to see it stands the test of time. You scripted this as a blueprint for how you wanted our relationship, bdsm and love affair, to go. And for a time it did.
Sadly, we got lost in the details of life, and the actions of haters who wanted to desecrate that which they craved themselves. And sadly, they succeeded.
But I love it, and what we wanted, as much today at I did when we wrote it. I love how you saw me here-- as a submissive, YOUR submissive. How I miss those exercises ... miss you even more. I hope you remember us from above, and smile as I am now. The tears finally subsiding ... the regrets for things said, done, unsaid and not done finally numbing. Our undoing was unnecessary, untruths accepted as gospel, trusted ones proving so untrustworthy. But even more than that, I so wish we could've said goodbye. My heart breaks that those loving words weren't our last. I miss you so, my Sir, my Dean, my love. Rest well ... your kitten
I remember when we began writing together ... this was our first collaboration. How lovely to see it stands the test of time. You scripted this as a blueprint for how you wanted our relationship, bdsm and love affair, to go. And for a time it did.
Sadly, we got lost in the details of life, and the actions of haters who wanted to desecrate that which they craved themselves. And sadly, they succeeded.
But I love it, and what we wanted, as much today at I did when we wrote it. I love how you saw me here-- as a submissive, YOUR submissive. How I miss those exercises ... miss you even more. I hope you remember us from above, and smile as I am now. The tears finally subsiding ... the regrets for things said, done, unsaid and not done finally numbing. Our undoing was unnecessary, untruths accepted as gospel, trusted ones proving so untrustworthy. But even more than that, I so wish we could've said goodbye. My heart breaks that those loving words weren't our last. I miss you so, my Sir, my Dean, my love. Rest well ... your kitten
