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I miss you, I do
On days like this
On this day
Rain seems particularly appropriate
I want it to pour
To drown in the coolness of it
Wrapping my hands around the pools
In my palms,
Wet clay
Holding skies tears
The storm that lets me know
I am not alone in my grief
That my tears are not for nought
That the whole universe weeps
In the memory of you
On this day
Rain seems particularly appropriate
I want it to pour
To drown in the coolness of it
Wrapping my hands around the pools
In my palms,
Wet clay
Holding skies tears
The storm that lets me know
I am not alone in my grief
That my tears are not for nought
That the whole universe weeps
In the memory of you
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Re. I miss you, I do
6th Dec 2017 9:40pm
such a beautifully sad poem - so wonderfully crafted - really hit me in the emotions :-(
Excellent ink :-))))
Excellent ink :-))))
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Re: Re. I miss you, I do
11th Dec 2017 11:23pm
Thank you so much David for such beautiful thoughtful comments ... They mean more than you can know .
Humbled and honored by the add to your RL
Thank you
Humbled and honored by the add to your RL
Thank you
Re. I miss you, I do
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 00:59am
The pain and void left is deeply felt in this :(
The hole left by someones absence can be crushing.
Beautifully written. Hope the days become brighter for you soon. Hugs <3
The hole left by someones absence can be crushing.
Beautifully written. Hope the days become brighter for you soon. Hugs <3
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Re: Re. I miss you, I do
11th Dec 2017 11:13pm
Thank you so much sophie for the read and thoughtful comments ... Greatly appreciated
Re. I miss you, I do
lovely Jemac
you are beautiful
in love & even in your pain..
tenderly expressed & brought to life
with your vivid & emotive imagery..
I would wish your ache to lessen
it hurts like no other losing someone..
love Crim
you are beautiful
in love & even in your pain..
tenderly expressed & brought to life
with your vivid & emotive imagery..
I would wish your ache to lessen
it hurts like no other losing someone..
love Crim
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Re: Re. I miss you, I do
11th Dec 2017 11:15pm
Thank you so much lovely Crim for the read and beautiful comments ... Touched me more than you can know ... ox
Re. I miss you, I do
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 2:07pm
Sometimes it seems as though that hollow place belonging to someone now gone can only be filled by tears. This captures that feeling so perfectly
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Re: Re. I miss you, I do
11th Dec 2017 11:16pm
Thank you so much Ash for the read and beautiful comments ... Always appreciated ..
Re. I miss you, I do
Anonymous
8th Dec 2017 10:26pm
Oh JeM, my heart plunged
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Re: Re. I miss you, I do
11th Dec 2017 11:18pm
Splitsunsets your reaction brought me to more tears ...
Such a heartfelt response
Thank you ox
Such a heartfelt response
Thank you ox
Re. I miss you, I do
9th Dec 2017 10:20am
"Wet clay
Holding skies tears"
This purely beautiful, and the whole work is wonderful as usual....
Love, RoseJasmine
Holding skies tears"
This purely beautiful, and the whole work is wonderful as usual....
Love, RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. I miss you, I do
11th Dec 2017 11:20pm
Thank you so much RoseJasmine for leaving such beautiful and thoughtful comments ... Humbled and honored by the add to your RL
Thank you
Thank you