deepundergroundpoetry.com
Rapture with Intent
Matching underwear
one meaning
one intent.
Ravish him, slowly, recklessly.
Boundless.
Meaningless.
Gaze locked
lost within the tides.
Hooked.
I avert his eyes
before he recognises the pain in them.
Biting down on my lip
as I flick my hair over my shoulder,
I give you the nod, the command
to follow me upstairs.
Tracing the curve of my body
as you closely follow me
to the summit,
where your teeth sink
in the nape of my neck,
leaving promises
to my bare skin.
You grab my hair
move my face closer to yours.
Push me down on the bed,
your hot breath
whispering fiery desires into my ear.
You kiss me passionately
lighting little fires along my skin.
Your fingers feathering over my hips
sending electrical currents
through the entirety of my trembling body.
Wet and aroused
my knees fall farther apart.
Your tongue circling my clit
flicking from right to left
sliding up and down.
Tracing the contour of my cunt.
Aroused by your gentle sucking
the little button swells.
Like an anaesthesia
I’m numb.
I surrender to all you are doing to me
surrender to everything I feel.
The surging wave of the next moment,
as you whisper your intent in my ear.
A shiver running down my spine as
your hands grasp my hair and you back me up
against the cold brick wall.
Pulsating inside,
the hum of your body
a soulful ballet.
Without warning, you pull out and flip me over
order me to my knees.
Slamming inside me again
spanking my ass,
filling me in a soul shattering thrust.
Chest to chest
as you catch your breath.
Every bit of you is hard and strong.
I kiss your neck, taste your chest,
tickle your stomach, nibble on your inner thighs.
Licking your balls,
dragging my nails up and down your thighs.
I take you deep in my mouth as I suck and lick,
feeling myself get more aroused
with each of your frustrated groans.
As your legs begin to tense
and your balls constrict,
close to the edge, on the brink.
I climb on top of you and order you to wait.
Being sure that the intent is fully met,
you are under my command, at my mercy.
Rocking back and forth as you fill me,
reaching every hidden spot.
one meaning
one intent.
Ravish him, slowly, recklessly.
Boundless.
Meaningless.
Gaze locked
lost within the tides.
Hooked.
I avert his eyes
before he recognises the pain in them.
Biting down on my lip
as I flick my hair over my shoulder,
I give you the nod, the command
to follow me upstairs.
Tracing the curve of my body
as you closely follow me
to the summit,
where your teeth sink
in the nape of my neck,
leaving promises
to my bare skin.
You grab my hair
move my face closer to yours.
Push me down on the bed,
your hot breath
whispering fiery desires into my ear.
You kiss me passionately
lighting little fires along my skin.
Your fingers feathering over my hips
sending electrical currents
through the entirety of my trembling body.
Wet and aroused
my knees fall farther apart.
Your tongue circling my clit
flicking from right to left
sliding up and down.
Tracing the contour of my cunt.
Aroused by your gentle sucking
the little button swells.
Like an anaesthesia
I’m numb.
I surrender to all you are doing to me
surrender to everything I feel.
The surging wave of the next moment,
as you whisper your intent in my ear.
A shiver running down my spine as
your hands grasp my hair and you back me up
against the cold brick wall.
Pulsating inside,
the hum of your body
a soulful ballet.
Without warning, you pull out and flip me over
order me to my knees.
Slamming inside me again
spanking my ass,
filling me in a soul shattering thrust.
Chest to chest
as you catch your breath.
Every bit of you is hard and strong.
I kiss your neck, taste your chest,
tickle your stomach, nibble on your inner thighs.
Licking your balls,
dragging my nails up and down your thighs.
I take you deep in my mouth as I suck and lick,
feeling myself get more aroused
with each of your frustrated groans.
As your legs begin to tense
and your balls constrict,
close to the edge, on the brink.
I climb on top of you and order you to wait.
Being sure that the intent is fully met,
you are under my command, at my mercy.
Rocking back and forth as you fill me,
reaching every hidden spot.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 20
reading list entries 6
comments 45
reads 920
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Re. Rapture with Intent
Anonymous
5th Dec 2017 3:52pm
this an area that ive never been good at..
so to appreciate another's is a high for
me...
makes me have an lip licking appetite!
so to appreciate another's is a high for
me...
makes me have an lip licking appetite!

2

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 00:09am
Not an area I normally share through my writes either so your comment is a massive high for me :)
Glad it gave you the right kind of appetite lol.
Thank you <3
Glad it gave you the right kind of appetite lol.
Thank you <3
Re. Rapture with Intent
Anonymous
5th Dec 2017 4:01pm
Sexy write Sophs

1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 00:10am
Re. Rapture with Intent
5th Dec 2017 4:36pm
Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 00:11am
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
5th Dec 2017 4:40pm
<< post removed >>

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 00:16am
Yes, the whole intent on this particular occasion was to be the empress holding the power so would’ve been criminal to fail lol.
Thank you Danny - much appreciated.
Thank you Danny - much appreciated.
Re. Rapture with Intent
5th Dec 2017 5:46pm
the description is more than enjoyable.
liked your word use....
taking words we always associate with this act and rearranging, sorting them a new.
"Your fingers feathering over my hips"
"spanking my ass,
filling me in a soul shattering thrust."
liked your word use....
taking words we always associate with this act and rearranging, sorting them a new.
"Your fingers feathering over my hips"
"spanking my ass,
filling me in a soul shattering thrust."
1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 00:18am
Re. Rapture with Intent
5th Dec 2017 7:29pm
Oh hottdamn!!! Got the thirst, the hunger, the heat on overload!!! I need to
jump into a cold shower before the nut explode!! lol... whew, that's fire u spilled my dear!!
jump into a cold shower before the nut explode!! lol... whew, that's fire u spilled my dear!!
1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 00:19am
Haha, thank you Ric.
Glad it had that kind of effect.
Appreciate you always <3
Glad it had that kind of effect.
Appreciate you always <3
Re. Rapture with Intent
6th Dec 2017 5:55am
whoah...
Now I need to rest my mind from this overstimulation of burning senses ! lol
Quite a nice job into your fiery bed of passion
Nice
H
Now I need to rest my mind from this overstimulation of burning senses ! lol
Quite a nice job into your fiery bed of passion
Nice
H
1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 00:21am
Re. Rapture with Intent
Anonymous
6th Dec 2017 6:50am
sophie...this girl is all sorts of grinning and squirming...evenly matched in desire for the ultimate goal...very intense ink and hot as hell! Ma’girlie parts are all giddy and tingling!!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn

1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 00:24am
Hehe thank you Taryn, so glad you felt this one.
And yes, that ultimate goal was very much an important part on this particular occasion lol.
Deeply appreciated <3
And yes, that ultimate goal was very much an important part on this particular occasion lol.
Deeply appreciated <3
Re. Rapture with Intent
6th Dec 2017 10:28pm
This is top notch one lucky man indeed to have such passion and intent upon him I feel very hard now after reading this fine piece of ink damn you Sophie you get 3 🐨🐨🐨 koalas for your effort hehe 😊
1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 00:27am
Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
8th Dec 2017 12:10pm
Lol your welcome hehe
O it did that’s why it’s in my reading list for future reference hehe 🐨
O it did that’s why it’s in my reading list for future reference hehe 🐨
0

Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 7:15am
unholy hell Sophie
this is wildly hot fucking erotica..
love the power plays
& steamy, creamy lines
that made me tingle..
"Without warning, you pull out and flip me over
order me to my knees.
Slamming inside me again
spanking my ass,
filling me in a soul shattering thrust. "
mm imagining him giving you spankings
giggles so sexy..
love Crim
this is wildly hot fucking erotica..
love the power plays
& steamy, creamy lines
that made me tingle..
"Without warning, you pull out and flip me over
order me to my knees.
Slamming inside me again
spanking my ass,
filling me in a soul shattering thrust. "
mm imagining him giving you spankings
giggles so sexy..
love Crim
1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
8th Dec 2017 9:54pm
Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 12:18pm
"Your tongue circling my clit
flicking from right to left
sliding up and down.
Tracing the contour of my cunt.
Aroused by your gentle sucking
the little button swells.
Like an anaesthesia
I’m numb."
I was in awe of the way, how detailed, you described the scene like watching a movie. I was numb while reading the stanza, and still many other parts, full of sensual and sexual sensation....this is an intoxicating write Sophie.
Love, RoseJasmine
flicking from right to left
sliding up and down.
Tracing the contour of my cunt.
Aroused by your gentle sucking
the little button swells.
Like an anaesthesia
I’m numb."
I was in awe of the way, how detailed, you described the scene like watching a movie. I was numb while reading the stanza, and still many other parts, full of sensual and sexual sensation....this is an intoxicating write Sophie.
Love, RoseJasmine
1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
8th Dec 2017 9:55pm
Thank you lovely RJ - so glad you felt some of the heat of this evening ;)
Re. Rapture with Intent
7th Dec 2017 6:28pm
Jesus H Christmas!! - not what I was expecting at all - I am not complaining strangely enough - this one blew my socks of :-)))))
Big Like :-))))))
Big Like :-))))))
1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
8th Dec 2017 10:02pm
Re. Rapture with Intent
8th Dec 2017 1:13pm
"Biting down on my lip
as I flick my hair over my shoulder,
I give you the nod, the command
to follow me upstairs. "- i'm melting in this third stanza
"the hum of your body
a soulful ballet"- this line just feels so right
"I climb on top of you and order you to wait.
Being sure that the intent is fully met,
you are under my command, at my mercy."- consider me and army and you the general
this is a great fiery sexual write
fantastic job sophie_ericson
as I flick my hair over my shoulder,
I give you the nod, the command
to follow me upstairs. "- i'm melting in this third stanza
"the hum of your body
a soulful ballet"- this line just feels so right
"I climb on top of you and order you to wait.
Being sure that the intent is fully met,
you are under my command, at my mercy."- consider me and army and you the general
this is a great fiery sexual write
fantastic job sophie_ericson
0

Re. Rapture with Intent
8th Dec 2017 10:06pm
Thank you for the fantastic comment Samael.
Glad you felt the heat of the fire that lit this fun night ;)
Glad you felt the heat of the fire that lit this fun night ;)
Re. Rapture with Intent
9th Dec 2017 00:19am
sophie, this was more than hot. Your erotic mind took me deep into the heart of an encounter of extraordinary power and passion. You were indeed the empress here and you were more than a match for this man. Now, your scene is replaying in my mind and giving me the most delicious imagery to fill my fantasy.
John
John
1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
10th Dec 2017 10:47pm
So glad you were able to come along for the ride John ;)
Much appreciated.
Much appreciated.
Re. Rapture with Intent
Anonymous
11th Dec 2017 00:45am
Pulsing write poetess such poise and domination with passionate sage

1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
11th Dec 2017 8:15pm
Re. Rapture with Intent
11th Dec 2017 10:21pm
Very well written, really captures the unadulterated, unhinged passion. Takes your breath away, sets your heart racing, your thighs burning, and that great tingling feeling all over.
0

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
12th Dec 2017 3:53pm
Re. Rapture with Intent
Anonymous
12th Dec 2017 5:05pm
DDDAAAYYYUUMMMM !!!

1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
12th Dec 2017 9:56pm
Re. Rapture with Intent
14th Dec 2017 10:08pm
WOW....I need a cigarette and a replay....Outstanding Capture...true virtual reality....thanks for sharing!
1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
14th Dec 2017 11:27pm
Haha, love this.
So glad you were able to get such a clear picture ;)
Thank you, appreciated.
So glad you were able to get such a clear picture ;)
Thank you, appreciated.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
16th Dec 2017 7:25pm
<< post removed >>

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
19th Dec 2017 8:17pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
6th Feb 2018 3:59pm
<< post removed >>

Re. Rapture with Intent
19th Dec 2017 6:32pm
Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
19th Dec 2017 8:18pm
Re. Rapture with Intent
21st Jan 2018 2:53pm
Glad I picked this one to read this morning. Highly erotic and titillating. It got my blood pumping and morning moving with a kickstart...loved it Sophie
1

Re: Re. Rapture with Intent
24th Jan 2018 4:26pm
Re. Rapture with Intent
27th Feb 2019 4:20pm