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Mercury
She was in the state of fire that he loved.
Playing with the different elements inside,
he touched her in places only he could reach.
Losing her capacity for coherent thought. Overcome by the sensations he had given her ... she no longer needed words.
Eluding the torture of her beautiful mind.
The assault upon her body unfolds.
She burned and melted at his touch.......
Like Mercury in its most liquid state.
~WW
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3rd Dec 2017 1:15am
Exquisitely sexual in the truest sense. I loved how you lit my manly libido up with your sultry and seductive words.
Eluding the torture of her beautiful mind.
The assault upon her body unfolds.
She burned and melted at his touch.......
John
Eluding the torture of her beautiful mind.
The assault upon her body unfolds.
She burned and melted at his touch.......
John
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3rd Dec 2017 1:30am
Wow! I am humbled by your words .
Nothing can please me more than drawing the reader into the imagery of my writing.
Thank you John!
Nothing can please me more than drawing the reader into the imagery of my writing.
Thank you John!
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2017 00:46am
Sweet Christ...to not think and only just feel...such a gift...bravo!!! You certainly have my attention WW...
"Losing her capacity for coherent thought,
Overcome by the sensations he had given her
She no longer needed words.
Eluding the torture of her beautiful mind.
The assault upon her body unfolds."
~ perfect!
xoxo Taryn
"Losing her capacity for coherent thought,
Overcome by the sensations he had given her
She no longer needed words.
Eluding the torture of her beautiful mind.
The assault upon her body unfolds."
~ perfect!
xoxo Taryn

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4th Dec 2017 1:17am
Thank you my dear Taryn
Nothing pleases me more than when a reader can actually feel my words.
Nothing pleases me more than when a reader can actually feel my words.
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2017 9:59am
Very intriguing and emotive. Really enjoyed this! Thank you.

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12th Dec 2017 3:21pm
there was one poet here
three lines stanza expert
she would've with you flirt
ur curt
she has blurt
gone away hurt
He touched her in places only he could reach.
lovely disclosure sexy poet
three lines stanza expert
she would've with you flirt
ur curt
she has blurt
gone away hurt
He touched her in places only he could reach.
lovely disclosure sexy poet
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