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Candy Wrapper 🍬
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THEY CALL ME:
Dah CANdy WRAPpah!
jus’ a lil flakey like
saltine CRAcka’s!
born an’ raised ON THE
streets o’ Flint CON-CRETE!
...a city LOST
was once the HEART
o’ MICHigan...
I shake my head and I
LAY all those memories to REST...
‘cause them streets there
are now a-crumblin’
as I walk aWAY froma
life o’ softcore thuggin’...
I live now in
the capital LANsing-
BIG 10 UNI’...
don’t KNOW-WHAT to DO wit’ me!
as I BREAKdance mah entrance
onto the HIPhop scene...
I MICDROP mah CANdy WRAPpah!
…ya hear it a-crinklin’?
singin' it...
SHE’S a BITTA-SWEET!
😎
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Re. Candy Wrapper
2nd Dec 2017 6:27pm
beautiful Nightbird
I love the vernacular
used so cleverly here
the flow is fantastic
& it tells your story so brilliantly..
excellent..
love Brenda
I love the vernacular
used so cleverly here
the flow is fantastic
& it tells your story so brilliantly..
excellent..
love Brenda
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2nd Dec 2017 7:15pm
Re. Candy Wrapper
2nd Dec 2017 7:28pm
Wow - masterful comedic piece - this had me smiling laughing and wiggling :-)
Huge hugs :-))))))))))))))
Huge hugs :-))))))))))))))
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2nd Dec 2017 7:32pm
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2nd Dec 2017 8:34pm
Re. Candy Wrapper
5th Dec 2017 1:24am
I LOVED this! I KNEW you'd have something when I returned! It was a full Gemini moon! LOL!
You MUST record this!
You MUST record this!
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9th Dec 2017 7:14pm
Hehe I cannot express enough how absolutely ELATED I am by your enthusiasm Ahavati 😆
The Full Moon in Gemini, along with Mercury going Retrograde... has had a profound effect on me, likened to a Spiritual Reawakening 💫
Perhaps this will be the first poem I finally record! Stay tuned...
Much Respect ❤️
The Full Moon in Gemini, along with Mercury going Retrograde... has had a profound effect on me, likened to a Spiritual Reawakening 💫
Perhaps this will be the first poem I finally record! Stay tuned...
Much Respect ❤️
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Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 9:20pm
Love this sweet write, good fun and the dialect added to the authenticity and personality of it.
Thoroughly enjoyed :)
Thoroughly enjoyed :)
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9th Dec 2017 7:16pm
So glad this poem could satisfy your sweet tooth 🍬 😉
Thank you for your remarks Sophie, I always appreciate them!
Thank you for your remarks Sophie, I always appreciate them!
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11th Dec 2017 3:03am
Re. Candy Wrapper
12th Dec 2017 3:00pm
I feel like someone just got served at an MC battle.
i also have the insatiable urge to visit Michigan now and eat candy....
i feel the streets breaking beneath my feet like chocolate bark
if i'm strait trippin.... i'll fall on gummybears
well penned nightbirdblue
i also have the insatiable urge to visit Michigan now and eat candy....
i feel the streets breaking beneath my feet like chocolate bark
if i'm strait trippin.... i'll fall on gummybears
well penned nightbirdblue
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LMAO wow - absolutely loved your fresh comments samael! Suppah slick'n sweet!! 🍬
Please do come and eat up all the sugary goodies, no need to trip a’fool - I will share but please, don’t throw your Candy Wrappah to the streets 😎
Please do come and eat up all the sugary goodies, no need to trip a’fool - I will share but please, don’t throw your Candy Wrappah to the streets 😎
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10th Dec 2020 2:04pm
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