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Autumn III : Refugee Creeks
Drying quilts of rocky skin
atop beds of clay, red
retention of gritty inlay
Trickling molecules
forming covalent bonds
with hydrogen atoms;
Survivors, H2O refugees
fresh water immigrants
fleeing t'ward a saline
channel, salt-water seas;
the substance of tears
~
atop beds of clay, red
retention of gritty inlay
Trickling molecules
forming covalent bonds
with hydrogen atoms;
Survivors, H2O refugees
fresh water immigrants
fleeing t'ward a saline
channel, salt-water seas;
the substance of tears
~
Published 27th Nov 2017
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Nov 2017 2:12pm
27th Nov 2017 1:59pm
This is gorgeous imagery. Stanza 1 flows like a liquid dream with your rhymes and assonance. It evokes great sadness, while hinting at the affects of Climate Change.
I so look forward to more of these.
💜
I so look forward to more of these.
💜
27th Nov 2017 2:12pm
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28th Nov 2017 8:16pm
28th Nov 2017 00:58am
I enjoyed this a lot - beautiful descriptions - most vivid :-)
Excellent ink as ever :-)))))
Excellent ink as ever :-)))))
28th Nov 2017 12:54pm
28th Nov 2017 2:29am
I like this alot, how the last word lingers and awakens a deeper meaning that ties in with the title, it's really thought provoking, full of contrasts....
28th Nov 2017 12:53pm
28th Nov 2017 5:57am
I find it amazing that we made and need minerals from the planet, the same through out the galaxies, your spirit is so in tune with the earth,what wonders you wrought, nice Vati...
28th Nov 2017 12:55pm
Thank you, Dean. And so nice to see you back. You make the second older member
I've seen this week. 🍁
I've seen this week. 🍁
28th Nov 2017 1:55pm
Felt this solemn, but deeply beautiful treasure...so freaking good you are my dear lady....:)
28th Nov 2017 2:33pm
Anonymous
28th Nov 2017 4:05pm
Wow! Such imagery. Excellent
28th Nov 2017 8:17pm
